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One word can add an endless amount of depth to a story. Whether it's the word 'but' or 'finally'. At first, I was intrigued with this 'The Loop'. It's just a basic and uninteresting two words. But that's why I like it. I feel like you could add a single word to this synopsis, or a few, that...

You’re gonna have to elaborate on that

I wish nobody could use it to write.. I use that shiz like a dictionary and to learn about cultural eras and even just to use as a thesaurus.. at that point it’s a second google, even then, you have to be careful because they are slight chances at miss information. For more in depth things, I go...

Honestly… I want to hear everyone’s thoughts on using AI when concerning your work. Who’s against it, who’s for it? Me personally… I hate the idea of AI writing and executing my passion for me. I use GPT as a ‘Google’ for things like give me 50 alternatives for the word shocked or the word...

This is the opener of my sixth chapter. Without any context, what are your guys' thoughts? Beneath a closed and quiet slumber, the figure of a slender little girl with rosy cheeks and sparkling teeth. Her canines were slanted and her incisors were chipped at the front. To any ordinary being...

Go for it

The Lost Generation is the biggest obstacle in the novel FOR THE CHARACTERS.. (And sometimes me). Why would anyone care about orbs when such a world changing event is erupting? I do agree with how it looks like a shoe-in. I could go about remaking that second paragraph.. The reason the first...

You're in a library and pick up my book and read this synopsis. Do you bring the book home with you? And does it make you 'care' "How do you want to be remembered?" Thousands of years ago, during the Age of Adventurers, the phrase lingered over a smiling sorceress before an entire generation...

It seems I posted a less saturated one.. My bad, wrong file. But I agree with the lining. The text is premature because I did it so it's just a placeholder for now. I edited the original thread message to have the right one.

Dragon ball is one of my favorite shows. This is the first I've heard that it looks like dragon ball-esc. Maybe you're thinking of Shenron? Although.. As much as I love the show, it was not an inspiration for our work

Been working with my artists for a while. We are waiting a bit before moving onto the next stage of rendering but wanted to see if this grabs people's attention. I did the text so that's why it's just a plain color.

Wait did you see an excerpt you were looking for?

Here you go: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1093629/arash-the-four-orbs/

How would you have responded if he didn’t say anything? What greater detail is there?

You don't mind elaborating on your experience, do you?

It's not about being qualified. Us authors need to call one another out in order to improve. Readers aren't writers yet they guide us on what we are doing that doesn't seem very par.

We should trade first chapters as well!

Okay I'll Start with the first chapter then. You read 2 of the 4 chapters of mine, right?

How much would you like me to read? There's a chapter for the world and another for a prologue

It's not finished yet so I do agree. Next thing I was going to request was to add a form of shading and or shadowing so the dragon could pop out. The same goes with the four orbs especially the bottom two. As for the title card.. I did that myself so that's why. That's only a place holder. Many...