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  1. OatMush

    When I started writing my story, it was gonna be waaay smuttier and way less serious than it...

    When I started writing my story, it was gonna be waaay smuttier and way less serious than it ended up being. I made an unimportant character called 'Lumberhaver', I didn't think much about it then and didn't plan for him to really ever come up again. Now, he's the primary antagonist, and I just...
  2. OatMush

    That's fine, I'm honestly happy to give an ego stroke along with feedback. The only way people...

    That's fine, I'm honestly happy to give an ego stroke along with feedback. The only way people will improve is if they keep writing, so I don't think I'm doing wrong if I give them some gentle encouragement. I started the thread because I found the lack of feedback on my own story highly...
  3. OatMush

    Oh cool it's been locked

    Oh cool it's been locked
  4. OatMush

    Nothing, just don't want more submissions on a review thread

    Nothing, just don't want more submissions on a review thread
  5. OatMush

    Is there a way to request mods to lock a thread?

    Is there a way to request mods to lock a thread?
  6. OatMush

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Is there a way to get a thread locked? This thread is done, it's just too old for me to modify the title or first post. No one else reply please, unless it's a way to lock the post.
  7. OatMush

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Bruh ? Read the post above yours....
  8. OatMush

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    I should hire you as admin lol For anyone reading, this thread is done!
  9. OatMush

    [Closed for now!<3]

    I'm not sure I can be overloaded if I'm hardly even updating! I stopped organically here: Expose the gods that ruled this city. They had eyes everywhere. That's the only thing that he knew. These gods treated the city like a big playground, providing guns to all sorts of gangs small and big...
  10. OatMush

    [Closed for now!<3]

    I am Oatmush. I said so at the beginning. Thought about posting link, no real point though cause I'm not looking for more submissions, will edit when\if I get through what I've got. Yeah, your writing is quite good, all the best too you.
  11. OatMush

    [Closed for now!<3]

    Hello! It is I! Oatmush! I have quite a long queue in my other thread so I'd like to close submissions, but that thread is too old to modify the title, so I thought it would be reasonable to start a new thread. Everyone in that queue is of coursed still listed, and I will get to you as I can...
  12. OatMush

    I was writing a scene with a fortune teller, then realised I have to cut it because I have no...

    I was writing a scene with a fortune teller, then realised I have to cut it because I have no idea what I'm doing or where my story is going in the long run...
  13. OatMush

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Ok, wow my queue filled up quick! Since you've submitted multiple stories, I'm gonna focus on one and then just give a quick look at your others. I decided to focus on Strange Awakening, because I've again already read Tempokai's review on Jack Diamond so I thought I'd be freshest looking at...
  14. OatMush

    Most of my story happens at sea, and popeye just entered creative commons... New character get?

    Most of my story happens at sea, and popeye just entered creative commons... New character get?
  15. OatMush

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Rereading my review, I hope I didn't come across as too negative, I hope you figure it out and write the story you want to tell. Sorry I took too long ^^' If you ever post something, even if it's on another site, please feel free to resubmit!
  16. OatMush

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Hello! Sorry to make you wait so long! As per the rules you get to skip the queue! Now, to come clean, I am not coming into this particularly blind, I have in fact read Tempokai's review so I'm afraid my thoughts are not entirely my own. Lucky for you, I have the memory of the goldfish and have...
  17. OatMush

    Happy Bad Year! I'm putting ketchup in your champagne and cancelling your new gym membership...

    Happy Bad Year! I'm putting ketchup in your champagne and cancelling your new gym membership! Eat shorts!
  18. OatMush

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Oh Boi I was gone... a little longer than intended... It's a new year, and I've decided it's time to take this albatross off from around my neck... Sorry everyone! I've taken some time off but I'd like to start doing this again. I'm afraid my backlog is a little too daunting though, and it's...
  19. OatMush

    Am I doing metaphors right?

    Well for starters, it's cool that you've got bisexual male characters, don't see that many places. I'm not sure I'd consider any of this to be metaphorical, it's just awkward euphemisms, and maybe more to the point, it's all still telling. As in you're telling me that Haruto and Takawa are...
  20. OatMush

    Hypothetical Scenario??

    Hmm, interesting scenario. I live and work on a farm, so I thought I'd share some thoughts. 1. At Least here, there would be no immediate rush. Currently we have about a hundred tons of potatoes sitting in storage, and another two hundred or so of sweet potatoes in the paddock in various stages...
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