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its been a while since i was in forums, i mostly hang out on royal road forums these days, anyways i want an honest feedback for my story, i can take critical feedback, but keep in mind that im an ESL as you read. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/786195/the-barriard/ Thanks.

Even though im an ESL, go for it! i can take critical feedback, if its crap just say it! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/786195/the-barriard/

Yo this is a lot better, thanks!

Well I for got man lol. Here it is

yo, wassup. so i have been thinking, the synopsis of my story "The Barriard" kinda sucks, idk if its good or not, I tried changing it, and editing it many times, and people tried to help me do it too, but idk why, I am not able to write a good synopsis that will hook the reader to read the...

It's "we" bro, I mean like yall really hire editors?

Bro... I was confused at the first part lol.

Yo, just like the title says, what's a manuscript? Ik that it's like a rough idea of the story or smth, but I wanna know what it really is and is there any specific way/requirement to write it.

Try mine? It's "The Barriard"

Not the best but maybe try mine? It's "The Barriard"

is that Japlish? And man chill, i was also joking lol

Dang, you guys are certified trollers ? ?

Wait what, the link too u to RR? my bad bro I will check it Edit: welp, I had to remove it. Nvm here is the link. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/786195/the-barriard/

lol, can you tell me how to decrease the size? idk

Need honest review/feedback, I am in the middle of rewriting the chapters, and I need a feedback on how I can improve. Note: I'm an ESL (English second language if u didn't know) so please keep in mind before u review it, thanks!

Check out mine bro! It's in my signature! Please ?

Well, I don't know where to post this since it's been a year since then. But yeah, I'm back and have edited/rewrote/updated, or whatever you wanna call it, about nine chapters and published/scheduled some new chapters! I was busy IRL and couldn't focus on The Barriard. make sure to read, comment...

Hi, so I want to rewrite my story and need some feed back. I am an ESL so you may find grammar mistakes on the way. But still check out my story "The Barriard" https://www.scribblehub.com/series/786195/the-barriard/ And on royal road too, if you want...

Done buddy! That grammar is my weak point. Idk about before but there are some people who have actually started to hate the litrpg genre. But, I have only met one person like that. Maybe the majority still like litrpg genre and yeah, my reviews are somewhat critical. There's someone who left me...