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As long as it's not wish fulfilment with Op protagonist I am okay with anything

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Hello fellow writers, I'm looking to set up some review swaps here on the forum. My offer is simple: I will read and provide a review for your story, and in return, I ask that you read and review one of mine. I guarantee that I will complete my review for your story, offering thoughtful and...

Thanks for the feedback it was really helpful ☺️!!

Hi check mine out please https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1578771/somehow-i-became-the-immortal-empress-of-the-holy-land/

I would love some feedback about my current It's going strong but the lack of feedback makes it hard to understand what the reader is thinking is my story good ? Can it be improved? Etc I will gladly return the feedback for your story...

Hi! I'm looking for 1-2 beta readers for my Xianxia story. Specifically, I'm seeking feedback focused on the story's pacing and plot beats. I want to know if the story flows well from one arc to the next, if the cultivation progression feels appropriately paced, if the plot points land with...

Huh just now it hit me the story is about a normal girl becoming a goddess after a freak accident with her phone Basically she ends up becoming a goddess of few villages which eventually grows into a kingdom She is an Agricultural and forest based goddess the main story is how she struggles...

I am struggling with the concept of a god protagonist like how do you write one without making them super op but at the same time not making them completely weak and ungodly? Like what even makes a god a god ? Is it immortality (which by itself is a OP ability),faith (again another potential OP...

I happened to come across this little fanfiction site with some hidden gems in it Including stories that you won't find in Ao3 or fanfiction give it a look https://www.mediaminer.org/

Honestly I have been getting the same feedback on improving the first chapter even after a dozen or so revision...and I am tired of it So someone please check and let me know all the changes that I need to do to correct all problems for good Here is the chapter given below Eldralis..the...

I am poking fun of the lit rpg gerne you see this whole rpg thing is basically a illusion The exp is actually souls of those you have slain getting absorbed into you The status screen is a just the brain trying to make sense of the information obtained by certain analysts or appraiser only...

Actually I am making fun of lit rpg game here where apparently exp is basically sucking the life force of dead souls to improve overall abilities And the game screen is the brain trying to organize the direct information dump that one gets from the gods or dead souls memory along with...

I hope my chapter wise feedback helped

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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1470776/i-am-the-hero-not/ burn it till there is nothing left. DESTROY EVERYTHING !!!!! (I just need a feedback)

I care more about the criticism and quality of my story A good story will naturally attract more views

I am actually getting sent to my dashboard so can you please send me the story link instead

Hey everyone, I’m running an experiment to see how different writers would handle my story if they were the ones writing it. The idea is to understand how each of you would approach it based on your own style and choices. Rules: 1. You can change one of the following: - Genre (e.g...