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  1. Ararara

    hello again, need feedback on my rewritten chapter!

    Yes, much better There is still some choppiness, but I like it a lot more now :blobtaco:
  2. Ararara

    Chapter 04 is up! Feedback please!

    I wouldn't delete them, it only takes a minute to read ch1, but you do you. And also on Chapter4 there's some extra line breaks (Enters, new rows) in the middle of a sentence. Looks like a formatting accident to me
  3. Ararara

    Chapter 04 is up! Feedback please!

    I like it, but like half of your sentences are missing periods after the last word. Makes it a lot harder to read. :blob_highfive:
  4. Ararara

    Forgotten Title MC who can manipulate flesh/biomass upon his second awakening (More details listed)

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1289558/sins-of-marka/ ?
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    So profound :blob_evil_two: Always go above and beyond

    So profound :blob_evil_two: Always go above and beyond
  6. Ararara

    Writing The Non-Verbal Thesaurus

    It's a balancing act. One can certainly go overboard with lips curling, words being "growled", eyebrows being described all the time, etc. "Said" is usually a fine default, when the words being said are what's important. Or the action around them. I like a sprinkle of action tags for variety
  7. Ararara

    Stories with an MTF protagonist, discovering herself. Bonus points for romance!

    Hmm, nothing on my lists is quite similar to what you linked. I think the closest would be https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2188101/the-young-masters-maid-talks-too-much/ It's funny and sweet, and the MC slowly starts accepting their girl identity more and more over time, and there's a male...
  8. Ararara

    Version A or Version B

    I think I like option A more, although it has some non-sequiturs and maybe too much focus on the books and their titles. Is he a librarian? Without reading the context, I wouldn't have guessed he was grieving the death of his friends / squadron. But version B had more confusing sentences, such...
  9. Ararara

    Is this real or not?

    Less, I think. I doubt the way they calculate it is so straightforward. And many chapters are free up to limits, or can use watching ads to unlock, etc. It's an app mainly popular in India. A quick google search shows the site is a bit shady (readers complaining about agressive monetization...
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    My likes and dislikes as a reader

    Webserial, webfic, webnovel, we use the terms interchangably. :blob_ninja:
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    My likes and dislikes as a reader

    I would call that old-fashioned, and unusual to see in webnovels. Even though it's technically correct. Personally I find it ugly
  12. Ararara

    Give The Orc a Title

    Bald :blob_teehee:
  13. Ararara

    Favorite Roguelikes?

    +1 for Against the Storm, it's lovely.
  14. Ararara

    [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated)

    Well, they were quite short chapters. :sweating_profusely: I'm willing to give most stories a shot
  15. Ararara

    [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated)

    well, it doesn't help that the first minute of reading has this pattern three times. it's the most famous/obvious ChatGPT pattern, the triple negative. Or negative sentences in general. Ctrl+F the word "Not" or "n't" to make it more obvious. "The sky wasnt green. Not red. Not black. Just blue...
  16. Ararara

    Concerned About Ratings

    Its kind of that 5 star rating is default for "im reading this, I like it", and is the most common rating on the site. then the 4 stars "ehh there's too much problems i cant quite give it 5 stars but it's okay", or the 1 stars by offended readers who dropped the story after something they hated...
  17. Ararara

    High numbers or low numbers... what is the reality?

    if the tag is "Adult" I think readers will want/expect to watch the act? Probably? And I'm not sure I've ever seen a story on SH where sex was implied but not shown in detail. Though personally I like to see it skipped and hinted at Congrats on the great numbers :blob_cookie:
  18. Ararara

    Fiction Won't Publish

    Sometimes it just takes a while, especially for the cover to get checked and approved. Several days, I think? Someone who knows more should correct me
  19. Ararara

    Unemployed Individual

    Please Tony I need this! My Sun is kinda jobless 🚨
  20. Ararara

    Has anyone else had their story metrics break on SH?

    Maybe initially the extra views came from the "Latest Series" part of the homepage? Idk if the difference would be so drastic though, since many new stories are released every day, so you shouldn't stay there very long anyways. Or the story was on some of the trending lists and fell off? I...
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