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  1. MakBow

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    What makes a Good Power System

    This is something I've thought about for a long time as I've read LOTM, Shadow Slave, Dragon Ball, Bleach, Choujin X, Jagaaan, Hunter x Hunter, and many more series and when I see comments beneath videos I watch, they always say a power system is good mainly because of its complexity, but....I...
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    Military Run Empire

    What would that look like exactly? I've been using a lot of my love for Warhammer40k in my side novel, since it will be a steampunk dystopian world where they hail the Iron-Blood Empire and the Golden Emperor of Humanity from the 3rd Epoch, where they make soldiers from the day they are born to...
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    Idea: My MC is treated like a Dog

    So, in my side novel as I continue to build the world so that I can post it one day once I have everything set, I have this very dystopian like fantasy world with a mix of steampunk and Victorian. The country was war torn and because of that, city states were created to house to remnants of...
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    Your Guide to Writing the Best Novel (Pure Facts)

    Yup, you heard that right, I am here to tell you how to make the BEST web novel ever, no tricks, no scams. I'm going to tell you how to make art for the novels AND how to write your novel. Trust me, this is the best advice ever. This will guarantee you in the top 10 in the leaderboards or...
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    Writing trash for fun

    Does anyone here every write trash for fun? Like you post your dedicated novel while on the side, you write one you really are just there to enjoy and you, maybe, will post it. That's what I like to do. I can dump the trash over there, so I can put the groceries over here.
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    Improvement in my Entrance Creation

    Not going to lie, I think I'm getting better at making entrances, but I don't know, I'm too hard on myself to truly give myself a pat on the back Context Marching through the abyssal castle, where heavy malevolence was the only thing one could feel alone, the Star King, clad in white armor that...
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    Harems are easy to write, authors are just lazy

    I'll say it: Harems are the easiest thing to write, the authors who write them are just lazy. I mean COME ON! Free characters! With no effort to get them in the harem! And you're telling me you can't just add ONE conflict they have? I'm telling you; harems are literally a free pass of...
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    Thoughts on the false religion I created (In my story)

    So, in the mystery novel, I created this religion/cult for my mystery novel, and I want you to tell me what you think of it: The religions centers around Himvrael, a god that is nothing more than a fake god created for the mastermind to use it as a beacon for supernatural power and those who...
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    Damn bot notifications

    You ever just feel disappointed when you see that you have a message, thinking it may be a comment of someone who likes what you wrote, but when you open it, it's just a bot. Shiz's depressing
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    I need some advice on how to write a good mystery novel. Since this is a new genre I'm tackling, I need to make know some of the things to keep in mind (Context: It will be a Mystery, Drama, Fantasy, Steampunk)
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    Opening Scene

    How powerful or good do you think this opening scene is? Context SLAM! CRASH! In the room of a young lad who had begun to throw himself around his room, grabbing at his own face like an animal who had been infected by rabies, screaming in utter agony. “GIYYYAAAAAAAAAAAH!” He screamed, his shout...
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    Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods

    So, I decided to create this power system for a mystery, steampunk, horror, fantasy story I intend to make since I want to tackle the mystery and horror genre I want to know if I set a good amount of limitations and versatility [Magic System: Arcana Card] Arcana Cards are divine artifacts that...
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    Introducing the boss

    I hope I did this right; I would like any feedback for me to change it: --- Using his shield, Soo would defend his team against every other arrow that came their way. Bennett used his shield to reflect them at the archers, who were suspended in the air because of Soo’s assault... STRIKE...
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    Story Feedback

    You read it, you know it: Level Up – To Break All Limits I Have | Scribble Hub Tell if you find it enjoyable to read and what you like or dislike
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    MC Villain who is the Übermensch

    So, in my side novel that I write for more deep characters while I post my current, more surface level novel, I have this idea of my villain MC who I feel has a good basis for some peak writing, philosophical debates, etc. (Not that I think I'm good enough to execute them perfectly) He was a...
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    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    So, I decided to make this for my side cultivation novel, and I realize this is a perfect way to keep be able to rise the tensions while also giving strong people aura as well as making the heavens more involved in the plot than just being there for the sake of being there: Venerable...
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    Villian Protagonist

    Do you like em or hate em? Me personally, if they are good. I like when a villain protagonist has to go against the "Protagonist" of that era, being righteous and all that while the MC needs to be cold and cunny, a perfect foil to the 'MC' of the world. Only problem from what I see is that...
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    Power System I Made For Fun (I May Use It)

    Since I'm someone that loves making power systems for fun (that I will use one day), I thought of this power system while reading multiple novels, learning about Gu from China, then learning about Gu Cultivation from Reverend Insanity, so tell me what you think: [Power System: Vermina...
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    So I love making power systems for fun, Vermina Cultivation, my most ambitious one yet and most complicated one ever

    Since I'm someone that loves making power systems for fun (that I will use one day), I thought of this power system while reading multiple novels, learning about Gu from China, then learning about Gu Cultivation from Reverend Insanity, so tell me what you think: [Power System: Vermina...
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