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Like I said, this is the most "explicit" it gets, but she had thoughts like that a lot. Like, when Ethan tackles Jade to save her from something and Henry thinks "Why doesn't he ever tackle me like that?" At one point he pulls her back just before she walks off a building and she ends up falling...

Again, you're acting like I wrote a full fledged sex scene here. If you don't think the joke is funny, that's fine, but reacting like I said "And then Henry and Ethan both tore their clothes off and immediately started banging" just makes you sound like a pearl clutcher.

Because Henry have big hammer. Hammer for hit things. Henry like hit things. Ethan hit thing? Oogah boogah, Henry like!

Ask Omnii. Apparently people do legitimately have an issue with things like this. Yeah, it's an embarrassment thing. Henry has no filter and 100% wears her emotions on her sleeve, so she turns away because she knows what she's thinking will be painted (clown paint lol) all over her face.

I feel like you're overreacting here. If you don't think the joke is funny, that's one thing, but you're acting like a slightly edgier way of saying "I'm attracted to that" is the same as vividly describing her performing a sexual act. The fact that you decided to complain about misogyny of all...

It's meant more as a joke than anything. She has thoughts like that a lot, like when Ethan tackles Jade to save her from something and Henry thinks "Aw, I wish he'd tackle me like that." To go deeper into the story than is probably needed, she was made the Hunter when she was only twelve, and...

I know this is a weird question, but I honestly can't tell if this crosses the line into gross territory or not. So, first a quick, a quick lesson in Henry Riderology: Henry (who is a fifteen year old girl) is in love with her best friend, Ethan, who is in love with their other best friend...

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I mentioned in another thread that while I don't like the FNAF series, I admire the way Scott Cawthon was able to string people along for eleven games and counting by hiding little details in the background that observant people could piece together to discover the full story. I've wanted to do...

One of my favorite parts of building a world is coming up with new swear words for them to use. in Juryokine I had them say "smite." That's probably my favorite because of how versatile it was. "Smite you! Don't you smiting dare! Oh, smite!" In The Gray Ranger, they used "d'yargo." The lore...

A mixture of both, but leaning toward action. I don't want an elaborately painted landscape where every leaf on every tree is drawn with photographic realism, but I don't want a Mega Man sprite comic that took thirty seconds to throw together either. I want a comic book that's nicely drawn but...

Ok I've replaced it with this.

I just wrote this joke. I like it and I want to use it, but I'm not entirely sure if it works in its current state. So what do you think? Thumbs up or down?

Objective quality. People try to protect the things they enjoy from criticism by saying everything is a subjective opinion, but if you press them (and if they're actually capable of arguing in good faith) you can usually get them to admit that something can be objectively bad quality. Like...

Favorite: Mistborn: The Final Empire by Brandon Sanderson. Least favorite: Sarah J Maas. Pick any of her books, I don't care. I just really freaking hate her.

Guys! Please read the entire post! My computer can't handle games, so please stop recommending PC exclusive games! I really like 4X games on paper. By 4X games, I'm talking about games like the Civilization series. I love games that let me build something and then watch it grow, improvising...

If you're here, then I think it's safe to assume you enjoy writing. But what is your LEAST favorite thing about it? For me, it's rewriting. Nothing kills my enthusiasm worse than realizing the story I've written so far won't lead organically into where I want it to go, or maybe I'm just not...

That's actually part of my thought process here. As much as I don't like FNAF, even I have to admit that Scott did a great job weaving miniscule details into his games, enticing people to try and piece together the hidden storylines. I wonder if I could do something like that, but in book form...

I tried to read Phantoms by Dean Koontz a few years ago, and one of the opening chapters involves a woman having a lengthy conversation with a teenage girl, and I distinctly remember thinking "I have never been more aware of the fact that somebody is not a teenage girl than I am right now." I...

I used to love the Goosebumps books. They were probably the biggest name in kids lit when I was young. But I can't think of anything that could be considered a "modern day" Goosebumps. I know new Goosebumps books still come out occasionally, but it's nowhere near as big as it used to be. That...