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  1. ThisAdamGuy

    Guys, what is a thing that romanticized but isn't worth it

    Gaming. I love video games, but I cringe every time a story tries to make it "cool." "Wow, you took command of that army and used it to defeat an army more than three times it's size! Where did you learn to do that?" *smugly adjusts glasses* "I play StarCraft for over forty eight hours a week!"
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    Henry Rider 3 Cover!

    Here's the updated sketch. I told my artist the colors need to be a little brighter, but other than that it looks perfect!
  3. ThisAdamGuy

    What did you learn today?

    I learned that people who take up two parking spots bother me to an unreasonable degree, even if there's still an empty space for me to park in. It's just like...who the @#$& do these &$#@ think they are?
  4. ThisAdamGuy

    Made up TV Shows

    One of my favorite things to do is make up TV shows for my characters to watch. It lets me throw some of my weirdest, most random ideas onto the page without having to justify them. On a whim, I had chatgpt throw together some pictures for a couple of shows from the Henry Rider books. What about...
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    Henry Rider and the First Hunter's Hammer Blurb

    Never said he was an evil living puppet...
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    Henry Rider and the First Hunter's Hammer Blurb

    Since I'm hoping to release Henry Rider and the First Hunter's Hammer in the next month or so, now's as good a time as any to start working on the blurb. So, what do you all think of this? (Minor spoiler warning for the first and second books)
  7. ThisAdamGuy

    What's your least liked or most hated part of writing?

    Exposition. It's easy to say "just weave the worldbuilding into the story!", but unless the MC gets put on a game show where he's quizzed about his world's history, there are some things that just can't be slipped into a conversation without sounding wildly unnatural.
  8. ThisAdamGuy

    Good Fights Non OP MC

    Check! Check! Check! As in, it doesn't do that. Check! I don't know if it's quite up to kung fu movie levels, but my fights are highly mobile, so check! Big fat check with fries on the side! You should check out my story Henry Rider: Clown Hunter. The link is in my sig below.
  9. ThisAdamGuy

    Autocorrect Strikes Again

    Apparently I've been extremely confused this whole time. I thought "NPC" stood for "Non Pooping Character."
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    Autocorrect Strikes Again

    So I was just doing a little work on smurbledurb during my break at work, and I'm pretty sure Autocorrect thinks we're working on a very different kind of book...
  11. ThisAdamGuy

    Witchblade Copyrighted?

    Is anyone here a copyright expert? One of the characters in the story in working on is a magic using assassin. She combines stealth, spell usage, and knife fighting. I was going to call her class a "witchblade" but there's already a comic series and TV show with that name. So obviously there are...
  12. ThisAdamGuy

    Thoughts on someone leaving harsh reviews on your novel?

    Depends on the review. I remember a couple reviews that I got for my very first self-published book that absolutely burned it to the ground. I didn't see it back then (and hoo boy did I let them know it) but they were absolutely right. That book was terrible and should never have been made...
  13. ThisAdamGuy

    I literally just told you

    I literally just told you
  14. ThisAdamGuy

    The forbidden, unholy, and non-gluten free ritual to create the Chocolate Onion has been written...

    The forbidden, unholy, and non-gluten free ritual to create the Chocolate Onion has been written in the blood of six hundred and sixty six virgins HERE.
  15. ThisAdamGuy

    What makes a good power system?

    For me, the magic systems I've enjoyed reading and writing most always have one thing in common: movement. The more inherent mobility a powerset gives its user, the more interesting they become. A fight between magic users where both are just standing in one place throwing fireballs at each...
  16. ThisAdamGuy

    First time character building

    Okay, I think I've figured this out. Also, I learned out how to use boxes. Also also, I changed the base level 3 stats to 2 instead of 5. LVL 3, BASE STATS AND CHOOSING CLASS CLASS THIEF RACE HUMAN Strength 2 (+1 per level) Dexterity 2 (+3 per level) Constitution 2 (+1 per level)...
  17. ThisAdamGuy

    There are NO bad jokes

    Have you heard the one about orange man bad? It goes like this: orange man bad.
  18. ThisAdamGuy

    First time character building

    Of course I care about the rest of the story. But I've written over a dozen books, so I already know I can handle the plot, the characters, the worldbuilding, etc. This is my first litrpg, though, and I want to make sure the system I end up using makes sense and isn't going to drag the rest of...
  19. ThisAdamGuy

    First time character building

    I'm...not going to answer a question like that unless you have a really good reason for asking.
  20. ThisAdamGuy

    First time character building

    Ok, I've made some changes. The character (who is now level 18) starts off as a thief at level 3. The total sum of their stat increases comes out to 10 per level. They get to choose their race and start getting race bonuses at level 15. At level 25 they're allowed to choose as advanced class...
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