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Also throwing my hat in the ring for general review swaps. Feel free to DM me - both OP and others who have responded on this thread. My story is here: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1253758/playing-god/ Summoned by Lira, a stunning priestess, Nigel is yanked into a magical world of swords...

Mine (LitRPG, harem, progression) includes some decent smut. (Though to set clear expectations, the smut fits the story, not the other way around. Whole bunch of (completed) erotica on my patreon page if you'd like to take a look ... some of it available to free members). While I post five...

Ok, I understand this. For the record, I've written this entire story - so it's all getting posted, whether people like it or not :)

Thank you for taking a look. Forgive my ignorance, but what are Re:Zero shenanigans?

Well, I liked the way the first line and the first couple of paragraphs grabbed the reader. Then it got a little hazy, and I was less sure where we were or what was happening. I assume the class was being held outside, but some descriptions of the setting would be useful to help the reader...

I'm getting a lot of folk stop at chapter one. I'd really appreciate a few eyes on it just to see if there's something obvious I'm missing about why it's not grabbing folks. Story page is here: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1253758/playing-god/ Blurb: Summoned by Lira, a stunning...

Hey, So new to SH, and have started posting up my first story. According to the stats, a lot of readers aren't making it past chapter one. Is that an accurate reflection, or just the way SH displays things? I've gone over my first chapter a few times, and I can't see any major problems. I...