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From my experience reading certain stories with colored text, absolutely not. However, there are special cases where I guess it isn't all that bad, for example one of the stories I read uses blue color for whenever the words spoken are Latin, but it really doesn't add much to it anyways and the...

Damn really? It's from a story on SH, but it's a cultivator story

After looking at how much replies this thread is getting, I'm changing the format in which I 'review' you guys' stories. Also, I realized that since I'm only going to review a tiny part of your stories, I will be really focusing on what I don't like, to the point of being nitpicky about it. #5...

what's this

Hmmm, not really. Most of the time when I read any story I just go with the mindset of reading something fun, not something specific. If there's a sudden 'narrative betrayal' that I don't like (although it doesn't really count a betrayal) is when the MC suddenly got more than 1 partner. I know...

I once read a story where a man and a woman have a SUPER long distance relationship, turns out they live in different eras, BUT the thing is, the background of the woman is technically created by the man, but the man's achievements in the past is also supported by the woman, so yeah it's kinda...

Oh boy

Go to either: Authors > Discussions & Writing Tips: https://forum.scribblehub.com/forums/discussions-writing-tips.13/ or Authors > Story Feedback: https://forum.scribblehub.com/forums/story-feedback.14/ oooor... you can reply my thread, and I would review your story once the previous ones are...

Review #4 _______________________________ # Overview The cover is unique, but not necessarily in a good way. I can't read the title on the cover, might need to change the font a bit. The cover doesn't show much connection with the title, although it does connect with the blurb. However, at the...

Review #3 _______________________________ # Overview No one knows what the name means, I can't see what the cover is about, and the blurb is kinda meh with too much terms that I don't understand. I understand that you probably took your time thinking about the title and came up with this, but...

I meant what I said. It doesn't have to.

Who cares? From my two top favorite novels, one of them doesn't have proper ending, and it doesn't even have a sequel iirc, and the other one does have a proper ending but it's so not that good.

Yessir

Not good grammar mostly means you definitely don't read enough and isn't competent in english enough. Don't begin writing, fix your grammar first. Don't patch your mistakes with AI, you won't grow anyways if you do that. I would recommend reading chinese novels such as Reverend Insanity, The...

I don't think you read too much, judging from how you write in this forum. PS: Why is there spaces before your comma. --> blabla , blabla -> TF? Just use blabla, blabla Try to always write in format. Big S at the start, dot at the end, and clarity, not clearity. Poetic nature is VERY AI-ish...

No??? I told you twice that piece doesn't make sense. MAKE MORE SENSE wdym imperfection? Dawg why do I need to explain this someone help

Yo guys sorry for taking a long time Review #2: _______________________________ # Overview The cover is cool, but the small text that you added isn't necessary since they can't be viewed if you don't intentionally look at the cover. The title is really long, but that's fine. However...

Make more sense? I already mentioned why it could be mistaken for AI writing.

Whether a piece of literature is AI is always arguable. However, whether it resembles AI writing is different. For these specifically, I'm going to say yes it does resemble AI writing, because it makes no sense if we heavily analyze it. This piece is told from a first person perspective...

I still have a LOT of stories to review from my thread, so I'm not gonna review your chapter itself. However, a quick look into your story and you will find that: 1. Chapter 1's title formatting is messed up and is inconsistent. 2. Your blurb doesn't tell much beside bro got vision, also you...