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ive noticed that ive been using "as" a lot as well. thanks for the input, I'll cut down on the parallel prose.

wtf lmao

was wondering why i saw a rock getting bigger. then it hit me

i see. i used to write in blocks so i might've toned down a bit too much

lmfao. clever also, what are some of the popular tags that you think I should pick up? i cant seem to find that post. thanks

its just that my novel fits all your criteria lmfao

well

Dang. Thanks for trying, though.

If anyone is willing to read my work and give an honest review and ways on how to improve, I'll greatly appreciate it. I personally feel that the earlier chapters are a bit rough but the later chapters become a bit better. Thank you for your time...

It's my first work so I need some feedback. Thanks in advance. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/646791/i-can-copy-skills-with-a-system-in-another-world-litrpg-isekai/

i feel personally called out ? however, i feel as if my litrpg doesn't really delve too deep into the statistics and numbers portion of the whole system thing. i try to keep the fight scenes with action instead of numbers its called "I Was Beat Up in an Alleyway and Woke Up in a Dungeon With a...