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  1. PBJ_Time

    How are YOU going to fix the genre you hate or dislike?

    Genre I dislike: isekai How I'd fix it: the protagonist starts a Bacon's Rebellion every place he visits and listens to this revolutionary banger.
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    What would your relationship with your MC be like if they were alive?

    Mine worships UFC, craves a good fight, and has complete dominion over lightning. Chances are, I'm cooked a billion times over if he was ever bored. ?
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    Y'all ever felt embarrassed with your first attempt at writing?

    Eh, I've been tweaking on the pacing before I republish it. I know I got sidetracked by writing a completely different story based on my growing taste of Stephen King, but I haven't lost interest in litRPG stuff.
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    Y'all ever felt embarrassed with your first attempt at writing?

    My first story was called "Lifekiller," and I wrote it when I was 15. I attempted to deconstruct shounen tropes but just came up with incoherent babbling, less showing and more telling, and other grave sins. Honestly, I'll post the first chapter later on the feedback section just for the lulz...
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    Hi, everyone. You don't remember me, but please hear me out.

    Nah, I just want more readers, lol. I'm not chasing for more income (I got two part-time jobs), but I am chasing for ways to make my work a little more visible. As for the Amazon thing, it's just that I don't believe my horror novel draft will fit well for RR's audience. It's too saturated with...
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    Hi, everyone. You don't remember me, but please hear me out.

    I'm the Vampire Survivors-inspired litRPG dude who said I'd rerelease my book on November since that's when the Writeathon will happen at the end of the year. It did well in the first month (80+ readers), but I needed proper promoting if I wanted more people to enjoy my work. However, something...
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    Prematurely deleting my book now. I'm sorry

    Despite my family and I moving out to a different city in 2 months as I've said, we've have been busy packing our things, as well as buying new utensils and appliances in case our old stuff won't survive for long. I haven't had much time to write new chapters because we've been doing this...
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    I feel like deleting my novel (not due to burnout)

    Nothing but excellent critique, really. It helped me create a much better outline to fix the pacing issue.
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    I feel like deleting my novel (not due to burnout)

    Essentially, I finally gained enough tips from my two jobs for an ad campaign on RR, and my family's moving into a different city in two months. I also wanna revise the initial chapters with much better pacing because it's clear to me this issue is hampering my follower potential on that site...
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    [Beware the Horde] chapter 36 is out...

    [Beware the Horde] chapter 36 is out. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1285692-beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/chapter/1398590/ I was afraid I wouldn't be able to tie lie loose ends for the next chapter, but I got it all covered. Slowing the pacing down really made me realize all the possibilities.
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    [Beware the Horde] chapter 36 is about to release at 8:00 PM EST. I'll be posting chapter 37...

    [Beware the Horde] chapter 36 is about to release at 8:00 PM EST. I'll be posting chapter 37 afterward on the same day, depending where you live. It took me awhile to finish this since I'm currently trying to improve my prologue. Stay tuned! ?
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Winning again. ?
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Nope, I'm currently winning again.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    No, I'm winning currently.
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    [Beware the Horde] chapters 36-37 are gonna be delayed for awhile, but if memory serves...

    [Beware the Horde] chapters 36-37 are gonna be delayed for awhile, but if memory serves, Saturday on the Western Hemisphere is tomorrow where I live, so maybe I'm still in good hands.
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    I think it's time I write a prologue

    Honestly, that's a pretty funny premise, but I decided with something less goofy, but I will try to put my initial idea on how to end the prologue when I have time.
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    The prologue for [Beware the Horde] is about to release at 8:00 PM EST. I might change the last...

    The prologue for [Beware the Horde] is about to release at 8:00 PM EST. I might change the last part to something I wanted initially, but for now, I don't have time. Still, I hope it's nothing egregious. Stay tuned! ?
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    I think it's time I write a prologue

    It may be overdue since it's already been 35 chapters when writing this, but I've heard it helps give people the feel of what my story is all about. Please let me here some of your suggestions whether I should start with a bang or slow things down. Thank you!
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    Then, you're experiencing dementia. /s (I have never read anything about dementia's effects on...

    Then, you're experiencing dementia. /s (I have never read anything about dementia's effects on the human brain)
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