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It's not unique but I'm trying not to rely on tropes. Renalia's Tale. Thanks for you feedback.

I wrote a line in Chapter 3: Innocence Lost and Friendship Found about a magical book. But y'all know what I'm thinking about.

Won't happen for another 50 chapters probably. But she'll eventually have a black wolf puppy, which she'll find out even later, is actually a shapeshifter. Based on the Irish puca.

Just finished season one of Arcane. Without spoiling anything, there's this powerful line by Viktor: "In the pursuit of great, we failed to do good." If I weren't already writing a book, I'd write a short story around that.

One of the early feedbacks I got from my other story was my sentences were overly long. So I've worked hard to write shorter, to the point, sentences. Thanks for confirming that it's working. Granny talking good. Thanking you. You're right in that there is definitely a missing scene and...

Renalia's Tale Feedback in the thread. Only 2 chapters uploaded so far. Hopefully, that's enough. TheTrinary has given feedback over on RR. But I'm very interested in your thoughts/feelings too. Thanks!

Renalia is wallowing in despair, after finding out that her 10-card Deck of skills has 7 cards for Resist Hunger.

Just uploaded Chapter 2 of Renalia's Tale. Enjoy!

I realized I had been exposed to Irish mythology/folklore from The Fionavar Tapestry and The Wheel of Time.

The original idea started out as a full-on LitRPG. But as I started focusing on the characters more, I removed the stat boxes, skills list, etc. I wanted to remove the System messages and Market too but it's central to the theme. Yes theme, not plot. Don't quote me on this but I get the...

@TheTrinary, thank you for the feedback. I had placed the nakedness detail there to both give a little characterization for the characters and to ease the POV transition. But I get your point that it's a confusing transition to public relations. The core problem seems to be too much...

Thank you for your feedback, @RebelLion. I appreciate the positive thoughts. I just looked at Spacebattles and Sufficient Velocity. Unless I missed it, they only have the forum side of things, with stories posted as threads. I like the author dashboards that ScribbleHub and Royal Road provide...

Thank you for this thread. I'd love to hear feedback on Chapter 0 of my story.

Hi Marc, Thank you for this thread. I'd love to hear feedback on Chapter 0 of my story.

Both. Arcane (cartoon) and Edgerunners (anime) were both very well produced.

If blackmail is something that she's relying on, it makes sense for one of those instances to fail and fail badly, either putting her existing or future influence in peril. I don't have details about these blackmail attempts but maybe something like being exposed for blackmail? Edit: It'll be...