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Sorry if this is too long of a context. About 3-4 years ago, I posted my first chapter on webnovel, which resulted in a newfound hobby other than gaming—storytelling. This truly fits me since I love to immerse myself in my own mind and my imagination is not that bad. Surprisingly, my story...

where's the romance in this? ? I am not sure what do you mean by devoid of attachment? how can a man be devoid of attachment? and even if he is, who would want that? I cant see that as a lesson or something to follow at all. whats wrong with attachment? why must we be devoid of it? From what I...

This is gng to be a long reply so feel free to ignore this. Just know that I am thankful for the honest review. uurgh.... ive asked a review a few months ago and he said that my writing was lacking a lot in being active and descriptive... I thought I had tackle that problem... but I guess not...

mine pls, tq very much! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/603971/the-fateful-day/

I dont need a complete review, reading the first chap is enough for me... and also the synopsis, can you tell me what you feel about the synopsis? But regardless, ill give my thanks beforehand!:blob_cookie: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/603971/the-fateful-day/

Dear Lord, would you kindly grant me a moment of your precious time to peruse my humble story? For I am but a humble and aspiring writer, seeking your esteemed guidance and wisdom. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/603971/the-fateful-day/

Dear Lord, would you kindly grant me a moment of your precious time to peruse my humble story? For I am but a humble and aspiring writer, seeking your esteemed guidance and wisdom. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/603971/the-fateful-day/

Hmm... I think I get what you saying? Currently, we don't see much of the personality between the two kids. All we know is that the girl had experienced a disaster for her to end up like this. And the boy only acts like what any other reasonable person would do. I believe the lack of emotion...

If anyone would like to see a little more of the snip. Here it is. __________ But not long after, she noticed something out of the corner of her eye. She turned her head to get a better look, and that's when she saw it - a small green snake resting just beside her with its vigilant eyes fixed...

the story has 2 protag. and yea youll find it in the first chapter.

what software / A.I did you use to generate the cover? care to enlightened me?

So I got a review from TheTrinary for my first chapter. He said that it was too passive and not descriptive and declared that he wasn't interested to read further... and I took that very personaly– nah joke joke. I appreciate his review. And his advice was right so I started focusing on...

So use more active words and be more descriptive? Got it. Thx for the help! Appreciate it

there are a lot actually. One punch man, mob psycho 100, overlord, instant kill. the first and the last one could literally kill any1 no sweat. every rule is meant to be broken. everything is literally possible in storymaking. you just need to know how.

Was waiting till I edited all 15 chapters before asking to get reviewed by people, but since you're just offering first chapter I guess its fine? Anyway, I don't want to be greedy, so feel free to refuse, but can you tell me your opinion w the synopsis? a simple, 'not interesting enough' or 'too...

hey, you! you're finally awake!

A strange being appeared within my sight and stood in front of me with its twisted expression. It had 2 white orbs with a black point fixed on its face, a stroke of torn skin right below it accompanied with lines of black paint all over the top of its head. Four long sticks could be seen...

yeah I remember it showing up as a mistake. But i thought it was weird so i always dismiss it... i think my past me had actually disabled that suggestion... and idk how to recover it...

Though you wont find my story that has a System in this site(hiatus too), that story had a Xianxia setting and naturally I had an origin of it. but you might not understand if you dont read Xianxia. __________________ There were many worlds in that story. Each with its own Heaven. Now my world...

omg... im dying.... god... help me!:s_eek: