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Similar to C_P_Tuck's request, I need character designs because I am lazy and need ideas quick so I can write something. In specific, I need guildmaster characters for a conference sequence section. They dont have to be leaders, (weird guildmasters ftw), but they can't have no positive qualities...

I have a dedicated reader who did this as well. He wrote a postuive review, but still says that the first few chapters are a nightmare. He ranted about then a lit more in my discord, where I asked him for specifics and promised to fix them.

Hi, I just wanted to say that I'm also rewriting my prologue and first few chapters because that's where I lose a lot of readers. The one thing I'd say is to first zoom out and image you are the reader. Does it feel like a specific part is too long? Too short? Rewire first few chapters to flow...

1st makes him seem evil/more aggressive, 3rd is bleh, 4 feels weird bcs I can't really see his face(and no one holds two books like that), so I'd go with 2.

Also titles. Please don't tell the entire story in the title unless it is that kind of story(Ie, memes the title on purpose).

Iirc it was death in the title.

I feel like a lot of heavy foreshadowing happens in the synopsis and typically makes the story a drag if its heavy. If you are going to heavily foreshadow, I feel it should be an obvious fsct that happens soon and is then expounded upon as the story goes on.

No order Mission: Yozakura Family Yakuza Reincarnation Youjo Senki Rebuild World Twin Star Exorcists

I don't edit my chaps. I just write em, look over em once and ship em. Usually 0 or 1 errors that a reader may point out.

I have Lore blurbs at the end of chapters that often expand on things mentioned throughout the chapter without spoiling the story.

@Corty @AdOtherwise (I reviewed ur story maybe that's why.)

Arknights.

Which cover should I go with? 1. 2. 3. 4. And finally 5

What site/tech do you guys use to try out different fonts or placement of text on your covers?

Just try to post consistently. If you're stories good, it should draw in readers naturally. I mean I update very inconsistently(school), but I still get viewers just by posting chaps. No one got time to read allat lmao

Idk, because I haven't read your story. But you have 25 Slots for tags, so try to use them all. 1 per day, per 2 days, etc

Idk, it's weird because some stories get popular quick and some just don't till like 30 chapters down the line. It's weird. If anything he should have more viewers. You typically pick up viewers during long breaks. Might just be a tag dif bcs your tags aren't popular.

I can hop on this boat as well. Story will really pick up pace in a few chapters.

Same

I have an imgur link and that doesn't even pop up. Tried discord as well.