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Thanks! I am aware of the cuts potentially being jarring, my intention was to provide some context to the 'Main' scene and also set up some details for the next chapters. I actually also find it fun to break scenes up haha but I do admit I need to find a balance. Thanks for the feedback! I'll...

I'm gonna do some shameless self-promoting and recommend my book :blob_joy: Spirit Exorcists Synopsis: When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving Mark heads to her suicide spot to pay his respects. In a strange twist of fate, he is attacked by a powerful spirit that...

I really enjoyed writing these chapters and am excited to publish the next few as well! Do let me know how you found it and whether you enjoyed it or not! I'd love some comments and feedback on how I can improve as well! Do check it out! :blob_happy:

Hey, I appreciate the feedback! Will keep working on it!

As readers, do you guys care about chapter titles? I've been wondering if the titles I give my chapters could be improved to make readers more inclined to read or more excited for the chapter. Personally, if I'm already invested in a story, chapter titles don't really matter to me. But I can...

Sometimes the music I listen to inspires me as well! Like I'll be listening to something and like an idea for my story just pops into my head based on the song I'm listening too. I like it! Doesn't necessarily have to be thematic, just wanted to see what music inspires you or you think could be...

Just thinking about this the other day, what songs do you think capture the theme, mood, or message of your story? Or could be a song that just sounds like it fits even if the lyrics don't. Or maybe it's a theme song for one of your characters? For me, I think the song for my novel would be...

Check out Spirit Exorcists! Link in my signature :) Hope you find it interesting! Synopsis: When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving Mark heads to her suicide spot to pay his respects. In a strange twist of fate, he is attacked by a powerful spirit that reveals itself...

Hey, I'd like to hear your thoughts on my story : Spirit Exorcists Thanks!

I've edited them, let me know if it's better now. I agree that the large breaks can be jarring. Thanks for the feedback!

Hey, thank you for giving it a read! Yes, I was inspired by Jujutsu Kaisen and Chainsaw Man as well! Thanks for the feedback! Just to clarify, are you saying I should use more line breaks for bigger paragraphs in order to break it into smaller chunks so that it's easier to read? For chapter...

Hey, I'm Mareo, and I enjoy reading manga, watching anime, and writing! Genres I look for are generally action, mystery, thriller or sometimes comedy. Currently focusing on my only story : Spirit Exorcists A supernatural action story.

Hey, thanks for deciding to check out my novel! Sure, I'll check out your story too!

Hey, if you're still looking, consider checking out my novel, Spirit Exorcists! It's a modern fantasy world where spirits and exorcists exist. It's supernatural, action and has some gore too. There's no ecchi in it. Synopsis: When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving...

Hi, if you're still doing this, please do check out my book Spirit Exorcists! Synopsis: When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving Mark heads to her suicide spot to pay his respects. In a strange twist of fate, he is attacked by a powerful spirit that reveals itself to be...

Hey I would love some feedback on my first chapter! Thank you for doing this! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468057/spirit-exorcists/

Hey thanks, let me know what you think! Sure, I'll check your novel out too!

The first 5 chapters of my novel, Spirit Exorcists, are up! Would love some comments and would love to know what you guys think about it. Here's the synopsis: When Mark's troubled friend, Ruby, takes her own life, a grieving Mark heads to her suicide spot to pay his respects. In a strange...

My best novel is the current one I'm writing! Only because it's the one I actually felt motivated enough to write this much of and post. Spirit Exorcists