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  1. PBJ_Time

    I hope one day, I can use this song for my story

    You better believe I'll touch on the horrors of war and genocide. And no, I don't just mean the kind we puny humans are capable of. I'm talking about Chaos Space Marines shit who only follow orders from their Dear Galactic Leader, subjugating entire universes under their so-called "protection."...
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    Anyone down for a swap?

    I have free time later tonight, so I thought I might as well do a review swap. I'll read about 5 chapters of your story, and I hope you'll do the same for mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1285692/beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/
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    Ever used leitmotifs for your characters?

    For me, I link actual songs on the "author's notes" section at the bottom, but sometimes, I feel they just don't fit some of the characters and more on how I "vibe" with them. The first example where I feel like it does fit the character is this chapter...
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    You know what, I'm glad my story made it this far

    I just hit 2.1k views today (or 1.9k depending if the site decides to glitch out). I've been a told this is a good sign compared to other stories with way more chapters but way less views. Even if the views are mostly from my first chapter, it still managed to gain 300+ views alone. As others...
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    I feel like my views are diminishing

    I'm not saying my initial chapters are getting less views, however, more like the traction in my latest chapter simply pales in comparison to the first or even second chapter. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1285692-beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/chapter/1294899/ My stats aren't looking good...
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    Is an MWF schedule a bad idea?

    For those who don't know, it means I only post new chapters every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Now, I'm just kinda contemplating if this wasn't as good as a schedule as I thought it would be. It might make people forget I'm writing a book at the end of the week, and I've only posted 7 chapters...
  7. PBJ_Time

    More feedback, pls

    I've got 6 chapters published already, so I'd love to hear your thoughts. It's an isekai story heavily inspired by Vampire Survivors: a game where you fight millions of enemy NPCs in one area. The protagonist is a bit of a cocky brawler, but he learns pretty fast with the game's mechanics...
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    I got my first negative rating on Royal Road

    Gotta say, I'm not entirely bummed because I've got a better rating on this site, but man, that was still a kick in the balls.
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    Requesting feedback on my 4 chapters

    I know it hasn't even been three days since I published my book, but any feedback will be greatly helpful to me in the future. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1285692/beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/
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    Need help on my schedule

    I thought 12:00 AM (where I live) would be a good time to post new chapters, but the second chapter didn't get as much traction as the first one. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1285692-beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/chapter/1286732/ So, I gotta ask: would it be better to post on the afternoon...
  11. PBJ_Time

    Chapter 2 is out!

    It took me a while to edit this one, but I'm gonna post the next chapter on Wednesday to make it sync with my Royal Road schedule. Stay tuned and let me know what you think. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1285692-beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/chapter/1286732/
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    Okay, let's do a first chapter review swap

    I already published my book after a million revisions, so I might as well review other people's first chapters while they review mine. Like I said before, I'll read anything, including smut, gender bender, etc. I'm not picky. If you're into isekai litRPGs, please let me know what you think...
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    I forgot there was an approval system…

    I was worried why my story wasn't showing up on the site, but then I realized it still needs to be approved by the staff a la Royal Road. Oh, well, at least I finally published the first chapter instead of keeping it in the backlog.
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    First Chapter Impressions Swap?

    I finally published my book and thought I would do this for others. It's not approved yet, but I can wait. Any feedback for my story (that finally isn't a draft) will be much appreciated. I'll read any story, including smut, gender bender, or whatever kinky shit you write. My book is in the...
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    All right, I'm gonna publish my book

    I figured I should start here before posting it on RR. I've already set up a Ko-Fi and Patreon with the same simple "donate me a coffee" goal for now. I'm gonna publish it at 12:00 AM, GMT+8, with the first two chapters posted until Sunday, where I would then would post on both sites with an...
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    I've written 15 chapters so far. Should I publish now or wait for 20?

    The word count for each of my chapters is 1.5k-1.8k, so I'm worried if I'll run out quickly on the first month. This is why I'm also considering a MWF schedule to give me enough time to write two or more chapters (and to edit the tables that are a staple in litRPGs).
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    Never mind

    Edit: I've decided to ask one last feedback to someone else because I really gotta stop beating around the bush and just post it. Any interaction before this message is me being ultra-cringe, so be warned. For compensation, please look at this cat:
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    Can you write a premise just by looking at this AI image?

    I got this by typing random words out of boredom, and I mean really random. Feel free to write a premise or even a synopsis just by looking at it: My own short premise for this is along the lines of March Comes In Like a Lion but with three main characters and their families interacting with...
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    Should I jump the gun?

    Should I publish my draft now? Both here and on Royal Road? I have 20 chapters written already, but only 6 of them are even fairly intelligible thanks to Grammarly and many nights of revisions. It's why my draft feels so little at the moment whenever I ask for feedback, and why the latest...
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    Ladies and gentlemen, I introduce you the concept AI of my story's main villain

    Yes, your eyes don't deceive you. It's a bonafide, rusty old computer from the 80s, but it's ✨?sentient?✨. And let's just say my main villain is heavily inspired by a certain Harlan Ellison novel about hate and circuits. ;)
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