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  1. forli

    After arguing with people on reddit, I've come to realize how highly intelligent people on this forum are.

    You know what, I know that this has nothing to do with anything, but since I seem to be having a more unserious conversation in this forum for once, I want to take this chance to say something to @RepresentingEnvy that I've been wanting to say for a very long time. Pretending to be a vampire is...
  2. forli

    After arguing with people on reddit, I've come to realize how highly intelligent people on this forum are.

    I already voted, I only have one. I don't know if you're dumber but you are clearly slower.
  3. forli

    After arguing with people on reddit, I've come to realize how highly intelligent people on this forum are.

    Ok, I will. But only because you asked me, you're not even close to being the dumbest person in this forum.
  4. forli

    After arguing with people on reddit, I've come to realize how highly intelligent people on this forum are.

    Maybe you're just not used to interacting with people that disagree with you. Even reddit is better than a place like this, where everyone immediately jumps at anyone who makes even the mildest criticism of the community. And even in this very thread, there's a retard that is still unwilling...
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    How to write a proper killing intent.

    Well, a big part of my novel is this kind of thing being played for comedy, so I guess that's an option. But it might be possible to translate some of the way I do it even to a more serious story. -Even if most of the story is serious, using the killing intent routine for comedic relief can...
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    What's up with the MC always having some tragic background story? Views on this.

    -It makes them more sympathetic (this is the obvious one). -It gives them motivation. A character goes into action because there's something they wish to change, making it so that there's something wrong about their lives so far makes it easier to understand why they would want change and take...
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    How to write a certain scene?

    Well, I was going to say to make the description of the eating very detailed and/or make something awful happen while the character is just eating as if nothing was wrong (since that's how the Denethor scene works). But both of those things have been said already.
  8. forli

    How to write a certain scene?

    I don't know why you're asking me. Anything I could have said has already been said by other people.
  9. forli

    Enlightenment

    Well, to give a serious answer, I'm always imagining what things feel like from every character's perspective, both when writing and when reading, but never to the point of actually feeling their emotions. I do feel emotions in response to thinking about theirs if that makes sense. And when I...
  10. forli

    Enlightenment

    I didn't say that I didn't read it, I have, I still don't know what this thread is about.
  11. forli

    Enlightenment

    I have no idea what this thread is about, but I guess that if I don't answer it will be used as evidence of how I "refuse to be friendly or interact with forum games". So I'm going to say... no, not at all.
  12. forli

    Making your characters more marketable to a readers audience

    The most important thing is to make the design of a character say something about them, that attracts people that like that character type which are also the ones more likely to keep reading. For example, if a girl wears a witch's hat, you know she's some kind of magic user, if a guy wears some...
  13. forli

    My last attempt

    My problem is not that it happens, my problem is that many novels try to make it look like it's not a bad thing. There are a lot of common big problems in web novels that I don't feel the need to talk about since a lot of people are already constantly pointing them out. It feels to me that it...
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    My last attempt

    Do you see what I mean? Every single time I try to be a bit more friendly or I try to make a normal thread everyone starts going off-topic and shiting on me. Even when I go out of my way to ask everyone to forget about the previous fights, they just won't let me. Do you understand why I'm always...
  15. forli

    I'm currently a nervous wreck, constantly refreshing to see if anyone answers my thread...

    I'm currently a nervous wreck, constantly refreshing to see if anyone answers my thread...
  16. forli

    I hope you are not talking about me...

    I hope you are not talking about me...
  17. forli

    My last attempt

    Everyone will know it's me if I start talking about this stuff. I cannot continue my novel in another account. I don't like the idea that I have to hide who I am.
  18. forli

    My last attempt

    There are some tropes common in web novels that really rub me the wrong way. At first, I only thought of them as some really annoying stuff that I hated, but I kept getting into fights over it and it eventually became an obsession for me. The thing is, I would like to discuss these tropes in a...
  19. forli

    Is Scribble Hub dying?

    Sometimes I see the repugnant racist pro-genocide garbage that is popular here and it kinda makes me wish that it was dying...
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