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No, I don't want to go the OP MC route I don't find many of the characters likable. I want to go for he was insanely strong but the seal succeeds and he becomes as weak as he believes himself to be. From there he can build himself with the only OP part coming from the knowledge he will amass...

Thanks I felt it was better too.

Don't worry I'm not trying too had to change it. It's just that I would like to be able to write a synopsis. I feel it's a necessary skill to have. Damian Reed’s life was a grind of unremarkable days at a dead-end job in the sprawling urban jungle of Empire City. Everything changed when a...

I like the game very much and I thought it needed a fanfic. I enjoyed the infamous and prototype series so I thought to put them together. Yeah to be 100% honest I suck at writing synopses. They always end up like some book summaries. I'll take your advice and try to rewrite it. So let me know...

Read the synopsis and tell me if this is interesting. I have noticed there aren't really any infamous fanfiction. Would do you read it? Do you feel it's interesting? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/

I'm writing a fanfic story based on the game Infamous. There don't seem to be any novels on the subject so I'd like to see if people are interested in such a story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/

Could I get you to take a look at my new story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/

Here, can I get you to take a look at a new story that I'm working on. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/

I'd love some feedback on my little story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/

Oh, I suppose I'm too late to say I'm interested. If you still want to DM me.

Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/

Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/

Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/

I appreciate the review @Corty. Thanks for taking the time to do both:blobthumbsup: Yeah, the first story was my first attempt so I feel it needs quite a bit of tuning up. Your suggestions were very helpful.

Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/

Don't worry I do ask for other feedback and I also get some from my readers every now and then. Thanks for the warning I appreciate it very much. I'll try to be careful. Thank you for recommending that to me I'll check it out. You're one of the most thorough reviewers on here. I enjoy your...

Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it. I found it very informative and will go back and look over those issues and try to learn for any future stories. Yeah for monetization I don't do it for fanfictions. I just tell them I release 5 chapters past what I release on scribblehub as a way to...

Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/

Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/