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    This is my first time writing a cultivation novel so I wanted some quick feedback.

    No, I don't want to go the OP MC route I don't find many of the characters likable. I want to go for he was insanely strong but the seal succeeds and he becomes as weak as he believes himself to be. From there he can build himself with the only OP part coming from the knowledge he will amass...
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    Reading the synopsis is this an interesting story?

    Thanks I felt it was better too.
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    Reading the synopsis is this an interesting story?

    Don't worry I'm not trying too had to change it. It's just that I would like to be able to write a synopsis. I feel it's a necessary skill to have. Damian Reed’s life was a grind of unremarkable days at a dead-end job in the sprawling urban jungle of Empire City. Everything changed when a...
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    Reading the synopsis is this an interesting story?

    I like the game very much and I thought it needed a fanfic. I enjoyed the infamous and prototype series so I thought to put them together. Yeah to be 100% honest I suck at writing synopses. They always end up like some book summaries. I'll take your advice and try to rewrite it. So let me know...
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    Reading the synopsis is this an interesting story?

    Read the synopsis and tell me if this is interesting. I have noticed there aren't really any infamous fanfiction. Would do you read it? Do you feel it's interesting? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/
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    Would an Infamous storyline be interesting? Tell me.

    I'm writing a fanfic story based on the game Infamous. There don't seem to be any novels on the subject so I'd like to see if people are interested in such a story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Could I get you to take a look at my new story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Here, can I get you to take a look at a new story that I'm working on. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1170736/infamous-shifters-genesis/
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    The Insincere Post Ironic Unhelpful Feedback Thread

    I'd love some feedback on my little story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/
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    Review swap (5/5) first 5 chapters [closed]

    Oh, I suppose I'm too late to say I'm interested. If you still want to DM me.
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/
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    Quacky's synopsis review

    Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    I appreciate the review @Corty. Thanks for taking the time to do both:blobthumbsup: Yeah, the first story was my first attempt so I feel it needs quite a bit of tuning up. Your suggestions were very helpful.
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Don't worry I do ask for other feedback and I also get some from my readers every now and then. Thanks for the warning I appreciate it very much. I'll try to be careful. Thank you for recommending that to me I'll check it out. You're one of the most thorough reviewers on here. I enjoy your...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it. I found it very informative and will go back and look over those issues and try to learn for any future stories. Yeah for monetization I don't do it for fanfictions. I just tell them I release 5 chapters past what I release on scribblehub as a way to...
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    After Becoming Extremely Bored, ile and Eve made a Lazy Book Corner

    Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/
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    Corty's Feedback Corner (Kinda... Read the first post!) --- Open until further notice.

    Do you mind checking out two of mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843745/my-goddess-mother-gave-me-a-system-and-kicked-me-out/ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/843715/bleach-gazing-mirage/
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