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As explained by previous speaker: Also additionally to religious reasons your concept is self contradictory. Succubi gain their sustenance by performing sexual acts on random men. A Jesus loving woman would never be so wanton. That means that either your MC doesn't really wants...

The way you worded your question suggests todlercon which is gross by all standards. Please cease from engaging with me if you want to continue that. What I asked is about situation like that: Fresh demon is created already in its adult form. Because of magical reasons there is no concept...

Dude! Why did you made title and synopsis and names of chapters in English, but actual content is in Portuguese? Its a trap! I can use google translation to try to read it but I doubt it will bear any resemblance to what you wrote...

Still you got 3 out of 5 sentences starting from "I" Is that acceptable or too much? Maybe I'm overthinking because in my language we have verb conjugation by persons. So I can write and say "Went to the door." In a way that is is clear that It is in first person and not any other (and what...

Btw. How to avoid starting every sentence from "I" while writing in first person (past tense)? I run to the door. I opened the door. I saw the mailman. I took the letter from the mailman. I closed the door. I went to kitchen. I opened the letter. I read the letter. I thought about content of...

Ah! A fellow rewriter... So after you finish rewriting Lay the Dragon you will start to rewrite Dragon Bound?

Ladies and gentlemen! The cover that took me to make, countless hours on a span of last 3 days. It was just approved! I was a little worried that there might be to much cleavage even after I covered some of it with a title. Now I'm worried that the story I'm writing might not be good enough to...

Shouldn't the markings of what is complete and what is ongoing be reversed than?

@SPS4 I read few stories and books in my life but must admit that I have never encountered that thing. What are the odds that it might be something specific for a particular genre of stories that you might have read a lot and I none? Or maybe it is a site (SH?) specific thing? People may...

Please elaborate at later date than. As I am new to writing (on this site) I would happily learn from more experienced author when you will feel better.

I am really afraid that people will have bad picture of my mind... How do I convince people that I'm not a total pervert? Do I have to write boring technical office story to balance:

Swapping like MC gender bends to woman just before thing happen. Or author is swapping narrative perspective from MC to his female partner before the act? If latter, than that sounds weird. "I'm a manly man. I complete heroic quests during my manly adventures. On my last manly adventure I...

why do that if after copy pasting the text SH removes Tabs on its own. Which is my original problem and reason for creating this thread. Now I'm afraid to post anything... I have few stories started. I'm not sure which one would be worse gauge of my character... I really am not like MCs of...

"Dear reader I'm being chased by wolves through this beautiful autumn forest." "Dear reader I was chased by wolves through this beautiful autumn forest." Both sound fine to me. First is active narration of what is at the moment happening to me. Second is a story that I tell later. The...

You could rewrite the same story for both tenses of first person and for 3rd person. Than post all three versions and see which form brings most success to your plot and characters. You could even rewrite your story in second person!

So if I write a story about slime girl that represents authors (therefore mine) sliminess?

I will just link you this two posts I wrote moments ago in one thread. https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/how-to-stop-suffering-from-success.17747/post-412920 https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/how-to-stop-suffering-from-success.17747/post-412929

I thought It was supposed to present my MC not me! I wrote first chapter of 3508 words. Time to buy colourful clothes!

have you tried rewriting them? Why "I go and open the door" is wrong while "I went and opened the door" is ok?

Why? (panicly checks which tense I had used) Believe or not smut from first person of a women might be intended for women. (or for dudes that enjoy gender bender stuff) Contrary to popular belief there are (some) women in the interwebs. Based on my personal observation so far I would even...