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  1. BetterNickPending

    A succubus that is also Christian?

    As explained by previous speaker: Also additionally to religious reasons your concept is self contradictory. Succubi gain their sustenance by performing sexual acts on random men. A Jesus loving woman would never be so wanton. That means that either your MC doesn't really wants...
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    Age of consent question.

    The way you worded your question suggests todlercon which is gross by all standards. Please cease from engaging with me if you want to continue that. What I asked is about situation like that: Fresh demon is created already in its adult form. Because of magical reasons there is no concept...
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    I want feedback on my story

    Dude! Why did you made title and synopsis and names of chapters in English, but actual content is in Portuguese? Its a trap! I can use google translation to try to read it but I doubt it will bear any resemblance to what you wrote...
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    Still you got 3 out of 5 sentences starting from "I" Is that acceptable or too much? Maybe I'm overthinking because in my language we have verb conjugation by persons. So I can write and say "Went to the door." In a way that is is clear that It is in first person and not any other (and what...
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    Btw. How to avoid starting every sentence from "I" while writing in first person (past tense)? I run to the door. I opened the door. I saw the mailman. I took the letter from the mailman. I closed the door. I went to kitchen. I opened the letter. I read the letter. I thought about content of...
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    Formatting problem. Please Help.

    Ah! A fellow rewriter... So after you finish rewriting Lay the Dragon you will start to rewrite Dragon Bound?
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    [daily] taking out the trash

    Ladies and gentlemen! The cover that took me to make, countless hours on a span of last 3 days. It was just approved! I was a little worried that there might be to much cleavage even after I covered some of it with a title. Now I'm worried that the story I'm writing might not be good enough to...
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    Formatting problem. Please Help.

    Shouldn't the markings of what is complete and what is ongoing be reversed than?
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    @SPS4 I read few stories and books in my life but must admit that I have never encountered that thing. What are the odds that it might be something specific for a particular genre of stories that you might have read a lot and I none? Or maybe it is a site (SH?) specific thing? People may...
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    Please elaborate at later date than. As I am new to writing (on this site) I would happily learn from more experienced author when you will feel better.
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    Formatting problem. Please Help.

    I am really afraid that people will have bad picture of my mind... How do I convince people that I'm not a total pervert? Do I have to write boring technical office story to balance:
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    Swapping like MC gender bends to woman just before thing happen. Or author is swapping narrative perspective from MC to his female partner before the act? If latter, than that sounds weird. "I'm a manly man. I complete heroic quests during my manly adventures. On my last manly adventure I...
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    Formatting problem. Please Help.

    why do that if after copy pasting the text SH removes Tabs on its own. Which is my original problem and reason for creating this thread. Now I'm afraid to post anything... I have few stories started. I'm not sure which one would be worse gauge of my character... I really am not like MCs of...
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    "Dear reader I'm being chased by wolves through this beautiful autumn forest." "Dear reader I was chased by wolves through this beautiful autumn forest." Both sound fine to me. First is active narration of what is at the moment happening to me. Second is a story that I tell later. The...
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    You could rewrite the same story for both tenses of first person and for 3rd person. Than post all three versions and see which form brings most success to your plot and characters. You could even rewrite your story in second person!
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    Formatting problem. Please Help.

    So if I write a story about slime girl that represents authors (therefore mine) sliminess?
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    I will just link you this two posts I wrote moments ago in one thread. https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/how-to-stop-suffering-from-success.17747/post-412920 https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/how-to-stop-suffering-from-success.17747/post-412929
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    Formatting problem. Please Help.

    I thought It was supposed to present my MC not me! I wrote first chapter of 3508 words. Time to buy colourful clothes!
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    have you tried rewriting them? Why "I go and open the door" is wrong while "I went and opened the door" is ok?
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    Which pov is better first person pov or Third person Pov

    Why? (panicly checks which tense I had used) Believe or not smut from first person of a women might be intended for women. (or for dudes that enjoy gender bender stuff) Contrary to popular belief there are (some) women in the interwebs. Based on my personal observation so far I would even...
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