Search results

  1. D.S.Nate

    Writing Dark Fantasy - First Person or Third Person Perspective?

    I'd say go third or at least third limited POV. It just allows for more head-hopping without it being too jarring. and when you are world-building from different people POV from 1 person that must be a pain in the ass to keep fully consistent since you are limited only to their POV. most times...
  2. D.S.Nate

    Writing How to slowly show intelligence?

    Intelligence is not a one-way track. It's essentially discovering patterns and problem solving using said patterns. A man can be an expert in flinging a plane but it does not mean he will know how to fix the components that made a plane thus if you put him in a mechanic setting he will come off...
  3. D.S.Nate

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I'm interested if you'll have me. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/377865/the-chronicles-of-sorataki-phantom-rocket/stats/
  4. D.S.Nate

    What's the highest view you get in a day?

    Mine is at 134 and counting right now. The new cover is definitely helping.
  5. D.S.Nate

    No Thoughts, Head Empty

    Try and change the location you sit and write. Do a little something to shake up your normal rhythm of sitting down to write. Time yourself in writing. like try and get as many words down in five mins and repeat it over and over. if all else failed I'd if you really are looking to get good at...
  6. D.S.Nate

    Decline in moral standards in web novels

    Having written my story for years now I can say that this trend is true and though I'm not going to join the trend. I've just come to accept it. My story never really gets too much attention compared to what I see at the top. Partly because I've started out writing with the intent of getting a...
  7. D.S.Nate

    Chapter 23... A transition point for both writer and story.

    So I've been putting most of my creative time into really doing a final version of my beloved story The Chronicles of Sorataki and given that this was my first ever book I'd written back in early 2008-2009 as much as I loved the old book there where bound to be some changes. The old title for...
  8. D.S.Nate

    the problem with originality

    Yeah, when you get down to it nothing is original anyways, and on top of that anything that seems original to you is only a matter of perspective. So anyone who's writing seeking originally is on a fool's errand. What I feel is important is how you portray that idea, how you approach the theme...
  9. D.S.Nate

    Ahh OK, I keep an eye out

    Ahh OK, I keep an eye out
  10. D.S.Nate

    Same, I got a discord, if you have one give me your ID

    Same, I got a discord, if you have one give me your ID
  11. D.S.Nate

    I see, It does ring a bell. I've not really done much on there for a while now. lol

    I see, It does ring a bell. I've not really done much on there for a while now. lol
  12. D.S.Nate

    What was your name in Wattpad?

    What was your name in Wattpad?
  13. D.S.Nate

    asking for free stuff

    I get you, I think the craft of drawing and writing are not that different, but it's the market appeal that makes the difference. You can sell a customer on a picture in a moment, all they have to do is look at it. Writing however takes a commitment to see if it's even up their alley and even...
  14. D.S.Nate

    First Person Or Third Person for two character litrpg?

    Might need to explain that one more... Hmmm. I'm looking at some of the takes and honestly my friend you are the only one who can best say what will work overall. I can explain the difference between the POV's but I should to me that you are knowledgeable already. I can talk about what ones...
  15. D.S.Nate

    What draws you in?

    For me, it's a very character-centric tone that draws me in cover-wise, that, and a promise of a vast world.
  16. D.S.Nate

    Recommendations Your works?

    I'm writing a fantasy set in a far distant future from our time and after mankind recovered an event known as the great fall. We follow Natalie, a young girl who's trying to get revenge on these people who experimented on her with angels' blood and were responsible for losing her parents. That...
  17. D.S.Nate

    Why the hell are you guys here!!!

    Hey what do you know, it's a small world after all lol. (I'm from Royalroad, left questions for me in my podcast thread I'll talk to DM's if need be)
  18. D.S.Nate

    Why the hell are you guys here!!!

    Going to sound selfish but I'm slow to realize what the rest of the crowd is doing around me whether that be up my alley or not. I came here to put my story and a friend told me that this place might be more in the crowd of what I write. I reckon it can't be any more worst than Wattpad and...
  19. D.S.Nate

    Username and Avatar

    N.S.Nate is a loose take on my full real name that I use as my pen name. Reason for choosing it was when thinking of one the name sounded like the one you would give a ship. Ships travel the sea just like we writers travel the craft of storytelling and I like to see the writing itself as a...
  20. D.S.Nate

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    If you could check out mine that would be great.
Top