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  1. FieryLou

    "First-Time Writer, Dragon Chaos Story – Pls Send Feedback! ?"

    Yeah, thats why I said; Just do your thing.
  2. FieryLou

    "First-Time Writer, Dragon Chaos Story – Pls Send Feedback! ?"

    Because every sentence is too much... Dunno how to discibe this, but it feels like many words are just there to fill up in an unnatural way. Like you copy-pasted your work and gave a prombt like; Lenghten this or something similair and in combination with the rest, it feels off. Lets not start...
  3. FieryLou

    "First-Time Writer, Dragon Chaos Story – Pls Send Feedback! ?"

    First time I'm against Stony's opinion... Never thought this day would come. I read ALL of the chapters and well, the writing is veeeery. Like veryyy. It even still has those bold schrift a certain butler loves do to. BUT... I do NOT think its comes from the OH Great Butler, but rather was just...
  4. FieryLou

    The Last to Comment Wins

    Winning by eating pizza
  5. FieryLou

    The Last to Comment Wins

    I'm winning by winning
  6. FieryLou

    How should I keep my audience hooked??

    Perhaps you should overwork your whole book first? You were the guy who asked for feedback some time ago, yet you changed nothing. Why do you wonder that reader drop it?
  7. FieryLou

    Today I woke up to this (CAUTION: sad post)

    Jump into the Yellow River and use Samsara
  8. FieryLou

    My GF is getting her wisdom teeth removed

    Dunno, but you better not eat anything tasty in front of her...
  9. FieryLou

    Who would win?

    Depends whom I choose to side with. If I back Envy up, she will clear. But... If I'm one of the harem writer... Sorry...
  10. FieryLou

    Who would win?.

    Depends if I'm with the humans
  11. FieryLou

    The Last to Comment Wins

    Once again, it is I who wins!
  12. FieryLou

    Oops

    Bless you
  13. FieryLou

    Overstimation or just sheer dumbness?

    Binging through thousands of novels, I noticed a very common pattern. Authors tend to overestimate themselves. "Read until chapter blah blah, from there it is very unique." "Epic battles and unique enemies." "Give the first 50 chapters a chance, I guarantee you will love it." Bla bla bla...
  14. FieryLou

    If you woke up a billionaire...?

    I would buy scribblehub and offer handpicked author fair contracts. If I'm already rich, might aswell spend it on those who deserve it.
  15. FieryLou

    Which continent are you from?

    I'm done huh
  16. FieryLou

    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    I must admit, I was kinda interested in your story after seeing this whole AI accusation, so I gave your "novel" a chance. Sadly, I had to drop it one chapter in. The writing is sus, to say the least. While I do think that a human could potentially write it, the combination doesn't sit well with...
  17. FieryLou

    The Last to Comment Wins

    I win by brushing my teeth
  18. FieryLou

    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    They use them in moderation. AI often just spams them, as they are "corretly" at this point. I just released the full volume — that’s how novelists do it, right? Gotta keep the readers happy, not leave them hanging on a cliff! If you’re wondering how I do it — just download Microsoft Word or...
  19. FieryLou

    Which continent are you from?

    How dare you?????? I'm from Europe, Germany, Bavaria.
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