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  1. Rockingashe

    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    It's all good, we all mess up alittle at one point. I won't tell Envy about it :s_wink: But thank you again my good sir!
  2. Rockingashe

    Would anyone like to read and give feedback on my first chapter of A Conspiracy for the Duchess?

    I honestly thought it was pretty interesting, the only thing that seemed weird to me; was in certain parts there were double spaces in between words. I know it's a weird thing to point out, but directing after it goes back to normal spacing. To me it felt like you typed something then changed...
  3. Rockingashe

    Thank you guys! ?

    Thank you guys! ?
  4. Rockingashe

    Thank you all ? I hope I don't let you down!

    Thank you all ? I hope I don't let you down!
  5. Rockingashe

    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    Atleast you're consistent about the vampires ?
  6. Rockingashe

    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    ??? You're going to torment me forever about it aren't you
  7. Rockingashe

    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    I have a new novel :blobrofl: Can you please tell me what you think? Thank you in advance! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/776522/tales-of-the-endless-darkness/
  8. Rockingashe

    I know I need to, it's just difficult for me. I keep thinking that I need to go over everything...

    I know I need to, it's just difficult for me. I keep thinking that I need to go over everything I wrote and re write it. It's just my brain, I'm not quite sure why I'm like this ? Thank you though, I really needed to read that. I hope you have a really good day/night!
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    She probably hated it to be fair atleast I hope she didn't ?

    She probably hated it to be fair atleast I hope she didn't ?
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    I started a new novel and im already nervous about it ? I've tried to improve...

    I started a new novel and im already nervous about it ? I've tried to improve https://www.scribblehub.com/series/776522/tales-of-the-endless-darkness/
  11. Rockingashe

    Can you please tell me what you think of the first chapter in my new novel?

    Envy is gonna end of getting you ????
  12. Rockingashe

    Hey everyone! Can you give me your honest feedback and criticism of my novel?

    Ah okay, I was worried that I was that terrible of a writer ? but to be fair its my first time writing so it wouldnt be surprising ?
  13. Rockingashe

    Can you please tell me what you think of the first chapter in my new novel?

    Hey everyone, I decided to start writing a different novel, im not stopping my main novel, but I figured I'd try something different. Can you please tell ehat you think? Any criticism is good, all feedback is welcome! Thank you so much in advance...
  14. Rockingashe

    Hey everyone! Can you give me your honest feedback and criticism of my novel?

    I'm sorry that you feel that its a 0/10 is there anything I can improve on from your perspective? It's gotten alot better, thank you!
  15. Rockingashe

    Hey everyone! Can you give me your honest feedback and criticism of my novel?

    Thank you guys so much! I apologize for taking so long to reply. I hurt myself at work and I haven't been on my computer until yesterday. I appreciate what you guys said! I'll take note and try to do better!
  16. Rockingashe

    I'm sorry ? I was at work and I'm leaving work now. *Edit: Thank you Envy!

    I'm sorry ? I was at work and I'm leaving work now. *Edit: Thank you Envy!
  17. Rockingashe

    I updated the novel last night! I hope everyone can stop by and tell me what you think!

    I updated the novel last night! I hope everyone can stop by and tell me what you think!
  18. Rockingashe

    General Story Feedback

    I always liked vampires, and I wanted to make my own spin on it! :) I hope you enjoy it!
  19. Rockingashe

    General Story Feedback

    I apologize about that, it's been a really long day.
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