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    How do you explain the surroundings?

    Sometime you don't need to describe the place, just tell the reader what place it is, don't need to show it if its hold no meaning or important. But if you want to, try describing it with introspection instead, this could show what emotion the character feeling, what they think, what their...
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    Harem opinions

    I hate both, I hate the protagonist for being a character that anyone can't empathize, I hate him for having a personality of a sideroad pebble, I hate his mythical moral code with no bad consequence. I hate the girls for being a doll with a personality of a dying fish, I hate them for not...
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    Never played it but sound interesting looking at the wikipage.

    Never played it but sound interesting looking at the wikipage.
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    :blob_whistle: :blob_cookie:

    :blob_whistle: :blob_cookie:
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    Random tips

    Technically, Antivirus isn't needed in Window since the OS already had the built-in Antivirus called Window Defender. (Just don't be stupid and download a suspicious exe file without checking it.)
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    I wonder if anybody here have watched HelloFutureMe OnWriting series on YouTube. But man I've...

    I wonder if anybody here have watched HelloFutureMe OnWriting series on YouTube. But man I've never thought I would be here trying to learn how to write when I visited SH year ago. https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL1TLSKocOLTvdl54a6wgNdB8oSm-eZ7h6
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    And the person made of flour was the mastermind.

    And the person made of flour was the mastermind.
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    Ben™'s dumpster fire-full of abs, lewds and bewbs

    I like that there's a story in it.
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    Guys, I now know how to prologue. Yay.

    Well it depend, sometimes you want to start with a Promise(letting the reader know what your story is going to be/setting the theme or tone/plot foreshadowing.), then character introduction. This come to being the exposition problem, well its hard afterall to make it interesting.
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    Business advice.

    How about just closed the business as soon as possible and find another job? You're going to lose money anyway, just retired somewhere or start another business in another country.
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    Give that 6 digits number you have read with Yuyuko in it.

    Give that 6 digits number you have read with Yuyuko in it.
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    MCs OP from the start are boring

    Its not the icing on the cake, if the characters didn't exist, the show would have lack most of the interesting part, same goes the other way around. I would describe it more like the character is the sugar and salt and Saitama is the flour and egg. Miss any of this the show would have fall apart.
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    Can't have shit in Detroit, even the thing you steal get stolen.

    Can't have shit in Detroit, even the thing you steal get stolen.
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    MCs OP from the start are boring

    If this story was all about saitama one-shotting them, the comedy would have live short. Like I said, Its the character, King being misunderstood, Genos and Bang(and a lot of them) being a well-written characters, even the villain.
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    MCs OP from the start are boring

    The problem with Overpowered MC was his/her personality and the character around him, not the OP part(most of the time). Some of the MC aren't proactive enough(which sometimes cause by the OP trait they had.), they lack goals and motivation(even their belief most of the time.), the author...
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    Writing How Do I End a Story?

    You can use this technique where you write the ending of your story and work your way there. It's easier to have a clear goal than vaguely write your way through.
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    How do I kill off a character to later be resurrected?

    If you don't want to make the resurrection feel like 'it happen because a god did it and the author demand it', make sure there is a huge cost doing so, like really huge, like if you resurrected someone, Amashilama will die or something(the same level as that.) (P.S. if you use an insignificant...
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    @Zirrboy, to make an MC rootable is to establish empathy, making the MC a good guy is just...

    @Zirrboy, to make an MC rootable is to establish empathy, making the MC a good guy is just another way, an asshole that is empathetic for example Kazuma from Konosuba would make a good character.
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