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80% of people who say or imply anything on the internet are lying in my experience

I went to read the review and it's killing me It opens with "I am an expert in violent fantasies and I understand not everyone has cool ones" Some interesting characters on the internet

I don't personally have any qualms with it, but from what I've heard webnovel fans like to be hit fast and hard. Take that with a grain of salt, I don't actually know what I'm talking about Also, I've thought a bit on my critique of what happens to a certain character in Chapter 9, and I kind...

Ah, I'll get back to this thread after like three years. My answer to this question doesn't yet exist

I've updated my chapters a little bit. Chapter 4, which I wasn't vey happy with before, seems a bit better now. Chapter 5 seems fine, but maybe I'd better give it a quick look-over just in case

Is there even such a thing as Gay fiction

If your goal is attracting more readers, I think it'd be better to rewrite what you have already if you aren't satisfied with it

Giving people the benefit of the doubt is always nice

AI uses a specific format in all its writing. There's the obvious recurring stuff like em dashes, the "it's not x, it's y", the groups of threes, but also some stuff I can't really put into words. But, it's easy to tell if you've ever tried to use AI for anything before in most cases Of course...

Do @Rachel_Leia_Cole and @Eldoria know each other? The former's story title has "Eldoria" in it and it's driving me a bit nuts

I have a lot of room to improve That's a positive, definitely

I'm merchandizing the fuck out of it

Take this I might be horribly mixed up, but I'm pretty sure it's a low fantasy. Only five chapters in, so there's nothing but first few chapters here

I have released more of my slop (chapter 5)

I would be lying if I said I didn't slightly forget I made this thread Chapter 1 and 2 should be merged to start. Chapter 1 is really short and provides not much hook. There's the spooky giant man, but the chapter ends on interrupted dialogue that really isn't tense enough to grab attention...

Bit of a deep cut don't you think

Redemption is costly in life

Guy with poor people skills leaves his job to become a magical startup bro but it's way suckier than expected

If I'm reading the thread, I may as well comment on it. One quick remark is that I think some of these chapters are a tad bit too short. I've heard that generally, people prefer chapters around 1.5k to 2k words in length, and these are way below that so far. The prologue is a bit absurd and I...

It'd be about what I expected