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Yo here is my second chapter of the story. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/716858-the-deformed-star-in-the-sky/chapter/717811/ (My first chapter is not good. But I appreciate if u read that. Only 2 chapters so far. I need some reviews to bring back my inspiration. Thanks for your help).

Hi. I don't want a first chapter feedback but a second chapter one lol. Because 1st chapter has info dumps and too much unnecessary writings. (It doesn't have important plot detaills) I feel bad to make u read that. But I am sure that second chapter is much better. So... Can u please provide me...

Thank you very much boss. i will try my best. Hehe. you rescued my inspiration. And Trinaryboss gave me an honest review. Didn't knew that brothers and sisters here are so good and friendly. my teeny heart is happy. Will read that recommendation.???

When I asked my friend who is a god, he said that my protagonist has become a ghost and chose not to reincarnate. I will meet him in underworld. Haven't tried muffins. I will try that later. But I really don't like garlic bread. But cake is heaven lol

Oii. Same pinch. Lemme pinch you. Wanna some cake?

Hii. Thanks for the recommendation. I have read this novel before. Not full though. I dropped halfway for some reason I don't remember. I will reread again.

I have read too many novels with op MC joining a sect when he was at his weakest. Before joining, that sect will be one of most powerful force present on the whole continent/world. MC passes the entrance test. As soon as he join, the sect become one of the weakest force (with op power enough to...

Hii. No wonder. I posted my story link on the old thread. Didn't notice it was dead lol. So.... https://www.scribblehub.com/read/716858-the-deformed-star-in-the-sky/chapter/716876/ Waiting for your response ???

Good evening. I am new here and yes, I am really excited to post my first ever story here. Glad to meet y'all here. Mind if you can read my first chapter and let me know about it? My amateur heart can't take this waiting lol. 1st chapter...

Hii. I am new here and just posted my new chapter. I really really need an honest review and I greatly appreciate if you can spare some minutes!? Here is the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/716858-the-deformed-star-in-the-sky/chapter/716876/