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so trueeee

who trynna run some tekken with me :devilish:

so based honestly. I respect it. im the type to seal away my old writing behind 300 wards and a giant safe door

lol I still have my first attempt at writing, so cringe. Like 8 chapters of pure steaming garbage. love it

Aria would probably lay on the couch, order pizza and have us play a fighting game or MTG or something. She could be convinced into going to the bar with a lot of effort.

I think an interesting premise is great - it captures the viewer's attention, but it doesn't make them stay. Execution, in my opinion, is the most important part. If your premise is old, tired, and has little left to say, a good writer can still wring the dregs of something new from it. People...

I hate cooking in other people's kitchens sooooo much. Where's the spatulas? Where's the pans? Where's the pan holders? Why aren the salt and pepper in the spice cabinet? Why don't you have (insert common ingredient)? WHERE THE FUCK IS THE CAN OPENER

You have to remember that your first work won't be good, not on a critical level. Take a breath. Because that's ok! It doesn't need to be perfect. It just has to be something you want to write. If you plan on making a book/submitting a web novel, I recommend focusing on a smaller story...

I think it's fine without the prologue. The information provided is about the same either way. I think you did a much more natural job on chapter 1 in regard to exposition. There's a thing here or there you could smooth out, but honestly, I don't think you need to add anything else.

I think one of the reasons it doesn't quite work is because of the way your verbs are written. It reads more like a report saying what happened, than something that is happening to the characters. ["Do Not Resuscitate was written in bold crimson letters. A doctor and a nurse waited patiently...

I'm #1 on trending rn and I didn't do anything in particular. I just released a chapter or two a day and people seemed to like it well enough to comment. I don't think you have to focus that hard on doing stuff in a certain way.

I read the chapter as I write it, if I stall in a scene I'll read the whole chapter again a few times until I decide where I wanna go. after I finish usually read it again then post