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I'm down: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1532062/their-cry-through-the-barrel/

It aligns both genuine advice and some brutal roast. That's an artform in of itself.

Hello! I've already been on these forums to get some feedback on what I could improve for my story. Your reviews were very helpful so I'm trying to get some more after applying what I learned. You can be really harsh if you want to...

I'm down for some roast. I already did one to get some feedback and tried to apply the advices I got as best as I could! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1532062/their-cry-through-the-barrel/ So I'd appreciate another round to see what can be bettered!

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I actually used ScribbleHub's advices to make the start more digestible. I do really want it to be Houston so I'll keep the city. However! I know one city can be boring. Therefore, while the rest of the upcoming chapters will focus on setting up the mafia and...

Synopsis: Society is rarely built with equality in mind. After the first recorded instance of an awakening the 1st of April 1925, and the subsequent attacks of monsters, the world began adapting itself to try and conform to this new status quo. Saint, rank, lair, liberator... A whole new...

Thanks! I'll keep that advice to heart.

It started as a vent story to get some steam off, and a self-imposed challenge for no more than 2K words per chapter. If you can stomach the themes, I'd like to get feedback on the prologue I wrote. (4 chapters, 1K each apart from the 2nd which is 1,9K) You can be as brutal as possible. I...

Haven't thought of that but it's true it could also depend on the time between updates. I guess I first need to finish entirely rewriting the chapter before deciding on how to split the parts and when/how to publish them.

Crap my first part is still 4 200 words. I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the opinion! In my case, it's just 7 characters talking in a car in Houston. (because it's a dialogue-heavy thriller about criminals.) However, I think it might be too long for an introduction so thanks for the...

Hello! Well, the question is pretty self-explanatory. I had some feedbacks regarding my chapter length being too long so I'm currently trying to trim down the chapter by splitting into parts and cutting a lot of fat from it. Hence, my question. What do you think a chapter's length should be to...

Well, you're in the luck I just finished reviewing the first five chapters of every story I was asked to, on Scribble and Royal Road. I'll get to it immediately. Disclaimer: The pilot I wrote is way too long, so don't worry I'm already working on fixing it, by splitting it into different...

At last! I finished reviewing everyone! :cool:

Okay, I'll add it to the pile. Thanks again for your help.

Sure thing, thanks. Thank you very much for the detailed review. I can definitely see that, being originally a one-shot, bogued down my writing because I needed to express too many things with not enough time. I ppreciate the encouragement and the examples and I'll make sure to do my part in...

Oh, I don't mind. (I'll go through it after wrapping up my homework.) Seeing your criticism, I think what I'll do is split the pilot into 5 parts: "Intro", "1st contract", "2nd contract", "Underworld negotiation", "Epilogue" to cut the length of the general text, and see when to introduce each...

Thanks! Yeah most of the issue with pacing stems from the fact this was supposed to be a one-shot. I'll try to see what I can do to make it more digestible. Also the cover was not made by Mael, I did it on my own with free assets hence the change in quality. You need help with anything?

Sure thing. I'll read your stuff. Mine is actually 20 000 words because it's an independent pilot. Therefore, you can take your time reading my stuff.

Well, I only have one chapter, but sure. I'll read your stuff!

Heyo. Everything is in the title. I need feedback for a specific story I wrote which is more or less Solo Leveling but the ensemble cast is stuck at a shitty rank. You can get me to read your stuff in return, or just the roast the shit out of the fic. I'm down for whatever. Here's a brief...