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  1. Suzumiya

    Is this paragraph awkward?

    Given no context, I'm curious if this paragraph makes enough sense. I've got some ideas for things that might be awkward, e.g. "Theory of Anti-Magic Compositions," but I'm not sure. I'd really appreciate fresh eyes, if anybody would lend them.
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    Got my first bad review today on RR

    From an academic viewpoint, a 0.5 star rating would be equivalent to complete failure to present the medium, similar to writing an academic essay about the merit of sweet corn rather than writing a documentary about the history of cornfields. In fictional literature, it would mean a product...
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    Yeah, well, my costume commission was kind of a bust. They made the sleeves 20.5" instead of...

    Yeah, well, my costume commission was kind of a bust. They made the sleeves 20.5" instead of 24.5" like I'd requested. xD Made it a little... not wearable. :)
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    Got my first bad review today on RR

    Commission a cheap Ugly Bastard OC, print them out, and scream at their image until you feel better. Maybe stab em a few times with a pencil! Then move on. Bad reviews are a part of life. Can't win 'em all; some will like you and some won't. Just gotta do your best to keep the ones who do like...
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    Yeah, I'm not counting on winning but I sure do hope I will! Happy Halloween, by the way! It's...

    Yeah, I'm not counting on winning but I sure do hope I will! Happy Halloween, by the way! It's comin~~~
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    Offering reviews!

    Hah! I admire your forwardness! I've got chapter one just about contest ready. A few acquaintances and close friends are reviewing it. I'd be really happy if you did as well! There's a short story contest whose deadline is coming up in December that I'm aiming for. Is there any sort of...
  7. Suzumiya

    Isekai Truck-kun?

    Hmm. I don't think so? It'd be an Isekai Transformer fanfic. :)
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    HOAL CH1 is contest ready! Wish me luck, ladies 'n gents! :)

    HOAL CH1 is contest ready! Wish me luck, ladies 'n gents! :)
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    Isekai Truck-kun?

    ... what if they're Transformers?
  10. Suzumiya

    If Pokemon is Food

    This is partially covered in the manga, actually. Though never inasmuch detail as I'd like, it is quite elaborate in some cases. Recommend you to read it!
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    Just need some feedback on this

    I resonate with this critique. There have been some studies on attention span and modern formatting versus contemporary formatting. It found that paragraphs beyond a certain length followed a specific histogram pattern on information retention and length. E.g. 4 bin length: Beginning -...
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    Writing Making my first novel.

    If your experience with it is anything like mine, your first novel will make future-you cringe at its mere mention. Ganbatte though for sure! It's a really rewarding hobby in many senses of the word 'rewarding.' Advice from me would be "... write every day, if you feel like it. Write on your...
  13. Suzumiya

    Favorite Novels that turned into a movie sequel

    "Lord of the Rings" for sure. Specifically, "The Two Towers". Reason is my late father would read from the LOTR series to me and my brother as we fell asleep. The second book was my favorite of the three, so yeah.
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    Transgender tag

    I'd say the "Transgender" tag should be considered to include the same things as the term does in popular psychological diagnostic manuals. That is, literally all non-binary gender. If an additional tag comes around such as 'Gender Bender', I would be confused.
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    Feedback on Chapter One

    I've finished writing, reading, editing and rewriting Chapter One such that I'm pretty satisfied with it. I wonder if other people would consider that, considered as a five part short story, the prologue and chapter one form a cohesive short story. You see, I'm approaching this eight-part novel...
  16. Suzumiya

    Give a title to this plot of a horror novel

    "Derangement of the Sous Chef"
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    Recommendations Transformation Novels [R18+ Kinda]

    Oof, I read a lot of books and nothing even vaguely comes to mind except one: "Queen in the Mud" (2020) It satisfies most of the general stuff >English >transformation >female >no hetero But I'm not sure it's what you're looking for? Normally I wouldn't even suggest it since it's probably not...
  18. Suzumiya

    「No! Get away!」 Nostalgic alt codes. :)

    「No! Get away!」 Nostalgic alt codes. :)
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    have fun!!

    have fun!!
  20. Suzumiya

    Recommendations Heyo. I'm looking for any GOOD series with a god MC

    You bet! I hope that the ending surprises you. :)
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