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    Writing Isekai MC not reacting to slavery

    Like Discount_Blade said, it depends on the MC. If he came from a timeline where slavery was something normal they wouldnt bat an eye. But someone who was born in modern days should be disgusted. But even that doesnt mean that he could do anything about it. Mostly depends on his influence. If...
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    How Do You Do, Fellow Kids?

    Welcome back, it's nice to see the author of my first fiction I've read, after I was fed up with all those jp/cn novels, back in action!
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    What are The Forbidden Topics And How To Tread Along The Line Without Actually Crossing Them?

    It should be really simple. Circumvent the problem with not mentioning the age but state of maturity. In most stories, goblins wont reach the age of 18 so they could never reach the age of consent that applys for 'humans' but they still fuck like rabbits. Just use common sense, the guideline is...
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    What are you researching?

    Thats something I have to look up in the future. Can't say if Im looking forward to it or not >.>
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    What are you researching?

    Yeah, it will help if the need comes up in the future. I just had a head start with 5 younger sisters who were curious and diligent beyond measure, unlike myself at their age, and parents with generally no time. Regarding eye color, it started with some mystical stuff like 'the eye is the...
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    What are you researching?

    Thankfully I have practical experience in that matter :P Today I researched why different eye colors are dominant in different regions.
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    Writing When Did Stats Become "Not Enough" ? (LItRPG-centered)

    Deciding on raw stats wouldnt be creative. But if you use stats in conjunction with skills it gets interesting. But the topic is more about stats not having any value. Why then have stats in the first place?
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    Writing When Did Stats Become "Not Enough" ? (LItRPG-centered)

    Your rant is understandable. In my opinion, LitRPGs that are way to complex where stats dont matter in the end are trash. Also the numbers in most LitRPGs are way too inflated to grasp their meaning. LitRPGs should be simple enough so reader can actually remember the stats/skills and gauge the...
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    How would you guys feel about this? (NSFW)

    Uff, RR is weird in regard to almost everything that contains sexual content. I cant see why it would be something that targets femdom crowds. You wouldnt be the first and surely not the last person who writes a story based in a matriarchy. If its a widely used practice in their society to...
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    I'm having trouble building the character of the MC, can anyone help?

    Sorry, I couldn't help myself after you posted that huge picture :P (yeah I'm going to hell for this...) In general, what cupcake said is true. People will always show certain personality traits even without memories that will directly translate into their thought process and how they will act...
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    How would you guys feel about this? (NSFW)

    I don't see the problem with your input :P To answer the initial question. I wouldnt drop a story because of it. I think the idea is actually hilarious. Kinda want to read about the experience and what the people in your story think about it.
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    Is there an audience for my story?

    I say, go for it. The concept you presented sounds interesting and I'm always hungry for something different. If it doesnt use the usual tropes, even better! Definitlely not GL tag. It would be misleading in my opinion. ai-subplot as someone already recommended.
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    Should my mc be japanese?

    My question is why should the MC japanese? Wouldnt it be discrimination if only japanese people are getting killed by trucks? It would also be refreshing if the MC wouldnt come from japan.
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    Your first story and first chapter

    Thanks for your thoughts. After reading the experience of other I see that many share the same worries I have. I just was surprised at how long it took me and wanted to know how it was for others. Even before opening the thread I knew that its probably different for everyone but I was craving...
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    Your first story and first chapter

    Sounds like a common disease. After I did that I asked myself if Im going crazy. I never thought I would research different kinds of steel beams but I did... and dont think that it would be important for future readers. I just wanted to ensure that I adhere to physical laws and nobody will know...
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    Your first story and first chapter

    Quite insightful. And yeah, dialogues were pretty hard for me. Even though I knew what the characters wanted to say it still was not easy to get the lines down with fitting details to convey the mood and expressions. It really was harder than I thought.
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    Your first story and first chapter

    I got a question for you. Beginner and experienced authors, it doesnt matter. How long did it take you to write your very first chapter? Yesterday I finally had the courage to start writing the first chapter of a story wich was floating in my mind for nearly a year. In that time I wrote down...
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    Could you be satisfied with a non-conventional relationship?

    While you are right about them being mentally unstable (highly likely) and therefore also are to blame for it to not working out, it also shows that people who are practicing those concepts have to really understand them and stand behind them. Lets not forget the effort they have to put in for...
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    I Bear a Grudge so Deep and True...

    Pretty sure the authors do this to build up the romantic/sexual tension and dont know another way without cockblocking. Its pretty annoying because it doesnt only happen in CN novels. Sometimes I wonder if they invest more time in fabricating those situations than thinking up fluffy/steamy romance.
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    I Bear a Grudge so Deep and True...

    Something I dislike too. Especially if what the MC did was only slightly above average and the author tries to sell it as something amazing. I start to really hate it if it leads to girls instantly falling in love for reasons not comprehensible to the reader. At that point I have the feeling...
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