I originally didn't want to do this, but seeing that you are a harsh(honest) critic, here you go:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/289162/in-the-elven-world/
I haven't been able to get proper feedback since starting to rewrite, you see...
Aye, its doin' pretty well just by the look I had at your statistics. You are pulling nice number of views, your chapters aren't short for SH, and you made it to trending. Added it to my reading list.
If I was forced to give advice, I would say that you are posting chapters a little too fast...