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    Fairemont's Faire & Friendly Feedback Thread V2.0 [CLOSED]

    Pure clarification request, respect your principles either way: Every chapter 100% author credited and human beta read/edited (albeit not professionals). There is an optional/skippable addendum that contains a fictional piece of legislation as worldbuilding context for the type of person who...
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    Male or female protagonist?

    On the one hand, variety is the spice of life. Could be interesting. On the other hand, if I were your reader and liked what you were producing, I'd want you to keep following your instincts if it's served you well. There's a case for innovation, but also for "if it ain't broke don't fix it".
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    What are your favorite, least favorite, and underutilized words?

    Favorite: asinine, balderdash, besmirch, bewildered, boondoggle, exacerbate, inane, indubitably, ire, pique Least Favorite: flacid, moist Underutilized: asinine, bewildered, inane, ire, pique ...and I won't be taking questions at this time
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    How can i write believable relationships.

    This is more roundabout work, admittedly, but what worked for me (as in made me happy with what I wrote, not achieved viral attention yet ?) was writing the relationship dynamics and events I wanted to see- that served the story I wanted- then going back to reread, solicit feedback, and edit...
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    Writing Characters and Communities

    Hm. This is kinda small and probably incomplete on it's own, but I'd say that when your characters think of their community and reference it... try to make each moment/memory/reference very clearly relevant to something about their character and values, what motivates them, a lesson they've...
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    What do you think the next big fad will be?

    I don't know what I think the next big thing will be, but I wish it was quality story telling, and taking time to invest in characters and their dynamics. So that I'm invested and actually care for the later payoffs. Rather than feeling like every word is run through an engine to calculate its...
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    Holzer books publishing company

    That's really frustrating. I can imagine having a moment of genuine validation and hope only to find out they're a vanity publisher. Sorry you went through that. But hey, you WERE noticed. Never know what the future might bring!
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    I bought a Steam Deck

    My experience with the deck is only second hand through my beloved, so grain of salt, but she plays Cult of the Lamb and My Time at Sandrock on it. Has a blast
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    Feedback requested

    I relate to this so much. Lol
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    I enjoyed this. Love your characters and worldbuilding.
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    Thank you so much! And I will definitely consider that. My new user status is showing, lol
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    I'm a new user as of today, and have begun posting my first work here (which I've been working on since June 2025). When I was younger, my older brother poured countless hours into a dark urban fantasy called "The Demon Song" he was writing before he abandoned it entirely. But I thought it was...
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    When does a character go from flawed to unlikable?

    I can't actually claim to understand Royal Road's culture, but your description is the most concise summary of what I have been cumulatively told. You made me laugh and I appreciate that.
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    When does a character go from flawed to unlikable?

    I feel like I can only speak for myself, but: 1. Weight of flaws against redeeming qualities. If all I'm seeing are flaws and their costs, with very little competence/virtue/other qualities I can sympathize with or root for, the scales start to weigh against the character. 2. Do their flaws...
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    What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author?

    My only feedback has come from people I personally know who were willing to be beta readers, and a handful of comments on an abandoned fanfic: so major grain of salt, here. But best feedback: incredible character voice and character dynamics, lean into it Worst feedback: "What if you...
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    [Tutorial] For new users of Scribble Hub!

    This is extremely concise, welcoming, and also doesn't treat me like a precious delicate flower. Much appreciated!
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    The misfortune of Ai writing style

    My experience with AI is that when you use it like a tool and assistant (explain this subject to me so I can write about it, do this math for me, what do you think of this dialogue, should I use a comma or a semicolon here?) it can significantly help unlock your potential if you take it with a...
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