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every woman in every r-18 chapter in a nutshell hahahaha

ty very much!

wow ! that is an excellent cover my friend ! I think i understand what u mean . The dialogue in my story is fairly light hearted for the most part in conversations while i make the protag spout out his twisted opinion on things some of the times making his exterior seem more than it is .I'll...

i think implied sex scenes work way better than filling every hole every other chapter and cute gestures go a long way

boiled it down to something like this for now . For now ill just stick with it maybe adding his maid to the next cover would work wonders for me haha I see , this was really insightful . Thank u for pointing it out . I call mine Breaking the Masquerade hence the cover showing two sides of the...

yeah i totally missed that .Thanks for pointing it out!

t ty! I appreciate it i ll check it out . I personally want to make something that's relevant to the story .Since I've already designed my mc it makes the work a lot easier .And thanks for the feedback

thank you for the feedback .I really appreciate it

oh i see . Will this work ?

well this certainly is a dilemma hahaha thank u lawyer

Hi! I made a poster for my novel in the artstyle of Persona . Well my friend did most of it anyways i only helped with the sketch since i am no good with art . The point of the cover was to showcase the mc's two sides .One where he is bound to his past trauma and the other where he is trying to...

Juice Yuuji is king . I'd also like to add Asagiri Kaito whom Yuuji was based on but Yuuji vastly improves upon Kaito as a character though .Although Kaito's past is just as tragic but Grisaia was a really solid novel far superior than Akatsuki no Goei . As for other badasses from other VNS id...

yes most of the songs do but i like the tracks which don't have vocals like Takemi's theme , Iwei's theme , Futaba's palace ,etc when i m writing .They are very relaxing

Music by Glass Animals , Slenderbodies and Two Feet are my go to bands for when i am writing . Their music is super chill . If i am not in the mood for vocals , i just put on the persona soundtrack

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/482143/breaking-the-masquerade/ i'd like any constructive feedback on my story if u get the time to read it .While it won't offer much into the story , but my plan was to address the kind of mindset the mc has , his mental support system and what demons are...

I think it's very fulfilling.If you've put your heart and soul into your work , the thrill only intensifies .You are always looking for ways to make sure your novel retains the spirit of what you want to write and what the readers expect you to do . The big challenge comes with the mc , while i...

thank you for the feedback .I'll work on making more progress .

i had trouble with writing inner monologues too or whether i should even write them or not . I honestly believe it comes down to your character . Since you mentioned some characters that have inferiority complexes they would never say whats on their mind for the fear that people might judge them...

Hi! I'd like some feedback on my novel too .It's more character driven in school life . I've written only 10 chapters so far . My focus has been more on dialogue between characters since most novels I've read tend to lack substance in dialogue . I thought banter between characters would come off...