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  1. EliseValkyria

    How good is the Wattpat site to publish my novel?

    In my constant search for new places to publish my novel, I am planning to publish it on Wattpat to see how it will go. Is there anything I need to know? Any secret clauses? Are they legal? The last thing I want is something like by publishing my story on there I've given away the copyright...
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    Help me decide what should be the next story arc for my novel

    Hello everyone again And well, the subject is already in the title, I need help to see which of the following possible plot arcs would make the most sense for to write next in my novel. My problem is not that I don't know what else to write. It's that I have several very disparate ideas that...
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    How would you detail a stealth section of a story?

    In my case, was a modern military setting, so I just played a lot Metal Gear Solid 5 and jus describe a normal playthrough or a mission. Go close to the area, try to not being seen, not make sudden moves, be slow, take out people that is alone or far from the rest.
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    Working changed my writing

    Something curious happens to me, and it is that in my case I feel that I have not changed despite having almost 3 years writing the same novel. But the difference is that I worked much longer on my novel before writing it for the first time. Basically I already had everything planned halfway...
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    Does your MC have a backup plan in case they lose their power?

    My MC fight dragons whiteout even weapons before have any powers, and even after then he once was robbed from them and he chase the enemy and kill him on a 1 on 1. The truth is that he even see his powers as a thing that gets in the way, because he is so battle maniac ( survivor guilty) that...
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    The Best Video Game Commercial/Trailers Thread

    the Halo 3 OSDT ad, damn, that's hard to beat. I literally couldn't care less about the Halo franchise, but I played the Halo MCC, and while all the games were meh, with the exception of Halo 1, and Halo 3 OSTD, and the fucking union they made couldn't have been better at selling what the game...
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    My guide on writing Large-scale battles

    Well, I only have 3 tutorials so far. I really don't know if they will be helpful enough because I think they don't even talk about things that really help, or what people expect from a guide, seeing the amount of comments about Ackchyually (This medieval historical event took place in this...
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    My guide on writing Large-scale battles

    Well, this tutorial is for novices, introduction to basic stuff. Of course there is a lot of things more. But the basic points still remains. A army will not attack a fortress jus became is a fortress, the place has to had something, a treasure, or a road behind that could have a benefit in the...
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    My guide on writing Large-scale battles

    Hello everyone The class this time is about how to write large-scale battles, two large armies battling against each other. But I emphasize that this is just my way of working on it, and it is only advice, not rules or laws, after all, there is nothing written in stone when it comes to...
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    Share Your Pain!!!

    I have been listening to this song for the last 3 days in a row after completing the game.
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    Help, how to balance a slime character?

    It would be comical if something like doing that made her inflate like a balloon or look obese.
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    Help, how to balance a slime character?

    Good suggestions, but it is an important character, I need it very often. I always try to make the battles big and complex. Where even if there is a very OP character that can win in a guaranteed way, he can still lose by not being in the right place at the right time during the battle. For...
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    Help, how to balance a slime character?

    Even if it is made of water, it is not absorbable, so if she uses a napkin, nothing happens. Although the lightning or electricity could knock her out or reset her form for a long time. Maybe things like pharmaceuticals will have double the effect on her, like a normal sedative for a couple of...
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    Help, how to balance a slime character?

    Well, that sounds like a good idea, the fact that she has to expend energy to recover or reattach parts of herself. Although it will have to be tiring as the story is focused on something more normal, and not so much as something like Chakra level or something like that. Well, the first one...
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    Help, how to balance a slime character?

    Hello everyone again Today's topic, I need help balancing a slime character. My novel has a lot of action scenes and battles. So I need them to be entertaining and tense. And most importantly, with repercussions, so that the readers are afraid of what might happen to the protagonists. My...
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    Stories set in Japan (preferably SoL or Romance)

    Hey, how about, my novel. It's mainly about gender change and there are action scenes. But the main focus of the whole story is the importance of family, as crazy and wacky as it is. I don't know, in case you're interested, and 240 chapters. Valkyria Squadron
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    GL books

    Ok, I was legitimately wondering why you did that, on my phone, And after I noticed that the signatures do not appear on the mobile page. I don't know how many of my replies in the past have been blank :blob_shock:.
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    GL books

    Hey, how about, my novel. It's mainly about gender change and there are action scenes. But the main focus of the whole story is the importance of family, as crazy and wacky as it is. I don't know, in case you're interested, and 240 chapters.
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    What is the best way to write a horror novel that can cause the reader to feel Goosebumps?

    Not ironically speaking, you can play the game and try to describe what you feel in a match of the game. I did the same in a small story arc in my story. Moments like the suspense of hiding from something you don't know or understand.
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    AI Pictures of Your Characters

    Although I would like to commission an artist to create a good design for the characters of my novel, with my budget of 0 dollars, well it's difficult. So I'm going with the affordable option. Which doesn't give 100% of what I have in mind, but it's close enough. Now, I also try to get a good...
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