Can anyone read the 1 chapter of my book and give me some suggestions to improve.
Its my first time writting and posting so i would like if you could.
Its name is Back Again
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/434150/back-again/
Could you please give my 1 chapter a feedback and suggestions.
It's my first time writting and posting so i would like if you could.
Name is Back Again