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Don't feel pressured! I just tend to write too much when reviewing; I don't know when to hold back lol. I'm glad you found it helpful.

Some Chinese action/martial arts movies: Shock Wave 2 (bomb man goes boom while the police try to stop him) Ip-Man Series (Hong Kong man beats up Japanese soldiers during WWII, classic :3) Not action/martial arts Chinese movies: Cook Up a Storm (movie about cooking battles, mm tasty)...

First off, I just want to say that I love the idea of a feedback swap! I'm just a reader, so I don't have any works to trade, but I'll gladly give feedback. (ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ To start, your novel, Xiao Mang, is great! I rarely make it through most first chapters due to my non-existent attention...

Alright, basic review: The overall premise and story have potential. I was intrigued by the Heaven orbs, three guilds, and academy setting. Magical academies are my weak spot, and I think it'd be interesting seeing the protagonist grow. However, the grammar, pacing, and formatting are a big...

Sure! Where can we view your story? And where do you want people to provide feedback? In this thread, PMs, or in a review/comment?

I guess I’m going against the grain and saying I prefer set-up isekai. I’m not really into reading about the MC’s baby years as it can get slow and boring if it’s not written right or if it has a pretty basic “born as a noble in a fantasy world” premise. If the MC’s transmigrated/transported as...

Yeah, it's an American saying that originated from a Coke-a-cola advertising campaign, I believe. Nowadays, it's used to mean "This item is the best price for what it's worth!" But it's not used for prostitution as I know. I remember being so confused about this when I was younger. I suppose...

Watch this: What to focus on to improve drawing skills fast For any artist but noobs especially, references are critical. Your brain and hands aren't trained enough to reproduce things from life. Ever tried drawing a bicycle from imagination? That normally doesn't go well, so imagine how...

In a quiet elevator, two friends, A and B, stand waiting for their floor. The numbers above the doors steadily drop. After enduring a few seconds of silence, A opens his mouth to speak. A: You know, I've been thinking... B: (Oh god, not again.) What? A: You know the saying "best bang for your...

Pen broke because I dropped it a while back I'm assuming. It's a surface pen, and from what I've read, I'm pretty sure I messed up the circuitry or something back when I dropped it.

So, my stylus broke a while back (a little over two months ago to be exact) right when I was starting to get back into drawing. As a result, I just did some weird, color-blocking, polyline things with my mouse. I didn't want to get my pen fixed because I was (and still am) broke and lazy. But...

I think a helpful rule of thumb is to consider if your story/passage causes the intended effects of gore. In an oversimplified view: Something is comedic if it makes you laugh or smile. Something is tragic if it makes you cry and feel depressed. Something is gory when it makes you disgusted...

I think describing a monster in great detail often comes off as grotesque but not gory. It crosses that threshold when you describe the monster with gory language. If you liken a monster’s skin to the inner lining of human intestines or their saliva as thick, slimy blood, then I think there...