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    litrpg tips from someone who hates litrg (unhinged rambling)

    I don't know what's going on, but I like this! :D
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Thank you very much! In truth, I'm really having a hard time with my prose. Even though, I'm always thinking when I write. Is this line needed? Am I repeating the same information? Am I delivering what I wanted to say? I really want to improve it but reading doesn't seem to help me. Is there any...
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    Casual reader feedback

    Hello! Please take a look. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1019722/age-of-spirit-fantasycultivation/
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    The Hive(Free Feedback Thread)

    Hi! Would you mind checking my story? Much appreciated. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1019722/age-of-spirit-fantasycultivation/
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Thank you! Oh great Chick for your knowledgable words!
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Hello! Would you mind reading mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1019722/age-of-spirit-fantasycultivation/
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    The Fat Elf's Review Emporium

    Hello! Would you mind reading mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1019722/age-of-spirit-fantasycultivation/
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Hi! Would you mind reading mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1019722/age-of-spirit-fantasycultivation/
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    Can anyone give some of their thoughts about my story?

    I see, thank you for your suggestion. I'll change it immediately! :D
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    Can anyone give some of their thoughts about my story?

    I would appreciate what you think of this story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1019722/age-of-spirit-fantasycultivation/
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    Thank you very much! Although it is sad that you didn't give me any advice, I'm still thankful. Sorry for wasting your time and I hope you well
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    Anyone got any stories that aren't isekai or fan related

    How about checking my story? I know it is shameless, but still, take a look thanks! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881373/transforming-the-world/
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    Very bad free feedback thread.

    Hello there! Can you please share your wisdom with my novel? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881373/transforming-the-world/
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    I don't know if my first chapter is good or bad

    Thank you very much, I needed the boost of confidence
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    I don't know if my first chapter is good or bad

    Can you give my novel some of your precious wisdom https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881373/transforming-the-word/
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    Bobple's Below Average Feedback Thread [Paused]

    Can you give my novel some of your precious wisdom https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881373/transforming-the-word/
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Can you give my novel some of your precious wisdom https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881373/transforming-the-word/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Can you give my novel some of your precious wisdom https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881373/transforming-the-world/
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    Feedback thread from me.

    Can you please give me some thought? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/881373/transforming-the-word/
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