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Thank you for the feedback good sir! Can you give me a feedback on another story of mine? Thank you! Keep in mind I have yet to properly edit this one! It's also my first time using sound effects! April 4th x738 E6 Maple City -2pm As usual, it was a sunny day in Metro City, everyone was...

Here is the first.chapter of one of my stories that I've put off, for a very long time cause I have been busy with other work! Hope you ENJOY! February 20 x739 E6 By the shores stood a tall cliff, which held up a small stone fortress belonging to a group of bandits called 'Cliffside Bandits'...

Hey y'all, i'd like some feedback for my story PLEASE. I'm not looking for feedback on the grammar or spelling, since I have yet to edit it, but i'd love feedback on the story itself is it interesting, like from what I have so far, does it pique your interest? Know that this is only a...

So I've previously posted a thread asking how to use Sound Effects and I got some great replies. Here is what I came up with so far, please tell me what you think and give me some more examples if you can 1. The tall demon raised his right hand in the air, and from his right palm, a long...

???I love this!

Another awesome example, Thank You!

Thank you for the awesome examples!

Thank you all for your replies! Much appreciate and I like the idea of using it in fast pace/action situatins

I was just wondering, how do you use sound effects in stories? I've never used them before so I was wondering if I could get some tips from y'all? Thank You!

OP?

That makes sense

Hmmmmm....Explain traditional publishing

What do you mean "Clear Concept"?

Thank you ill sus it out

Yeh I only stopped for two reasons 1. I was writing two other stories and keeping up with all three was pretty hard 2. I out the most detail in this story yet it was really being recognised and I can't tell if it's good or not

Hey can you guys please give me some feed back on my story? I'm not sure how it's doing since I haven't gotten any feed back from anyone and it's not doing well in the comment, view or like section. So I really need a feedback to know. I'll post the synopsis and a link to the Story, please check...

I have great imagination, so I normally just close my eyes and act out what ever I'm thinking in my head, trying to visualize as much details as I can with out over loading, kinda like lucid dream except I'm not dreaming. While I do this I will mumble to myself describing what's happening to the...

Yohhh so I just finished creating a Magic System for my Shared Universe known as Grand Adventure. I was wondering if you guys can take a look at it and give me constructive feedback, it would help me greatly thank you! I'll leave the link below! Magic System

That you for the feedback! I'll look out for the spaces in the future chapters

Helloooo everyone! I've written three stories which none of them are completed yet but id like y'all to check out two of my stories and tell me what you think! I'd appreciate constructive feedback but any type of feedback is good both negative and positive! Oh and if possible it would be awesome...