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Thanks for the feedback. I had added that part in to let readers know right away what genre they were looking at, but I guess the second sentence ("Elves, Dwarves, Humans...") makes that pretty clear on its own. As a temporary fix to this, I deleted that first phrase. I figure I'll rewrite the...

So in another recent post it was mentioned that my synopsis isn't great. I was hoping I could get some help making it better here. Here's what I have currently: I think part of the problem is that I have a lot I'm trying to fit in there, and I start with the world instead of the character. It...

Thanks for the advice, Jemini. That is helpful. I actually added that first chapter in after I started writing the rest of the story. It was an attempt to show more of the main character's situation before getting into the current plot. And now that you say, it makes sense that dialogue is...

Thanks, let me know what you think!

Thanks. I thought I had already made it. I'll try again. Also, I hope you like the story! Thanks for checking it out!

Hi all, I just started and was wondering if anyone would be interested in taking a look at my first web fiction. It's called Sprig and its about a girl who is exploring a mysterious land in search of her people, in the midst of a war. I'd appreciate any feedback I can get. Thanks...