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This is what I got from ai for my story but.....it feels kinda bad "Being a hero was everything to me... but if this is where it all leads, then I’m done." The world is on the brink of destruction, and its last hope—the legendary hero—has been put out of comission. Now, the impossible task of...

Hi, Any tips on writing better summaries that don’t suck? Mine always feel either too vague or too boring

Anyone still interested in review swap yet

I am more than happy to have someone willing to even read it

Anyone?

Hey everyone! I'm searching for brave souls willing to beta-read my fantasy adventure novel. I'm specifically looking for feedback on pacing, character interactions, and overall story flow—no need for detailed grammar corrections unless something really stands out. The story has a light...

I know I know,I even edited the whole story to make it better, more worldbuilding, better characterization,heck I even spent time developing a magic system and researching mediveal Europe

And...

Thanks I fixed that part

Ok so what should I do to show this in my story?

I know but this is literally the first chapter it's kind of hard to start with explaining the whole world especially since the story starts with the pov of a girl living in the village True a lot of world building details are added in other chapter but it's more of a general world with the...

Hi,I have recently been working on a parody fantasy story but honestly I feel like it's lacking Just let me know what I should do to improve it This is my first proper parody epic fantasy https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1470776-i-am-the-hero-not/chapter/1470779/

The entire point of the story is that it is rushed without any logic It's a parody it's not into serious worldbuilding, emotional damage and stuff thing just happen It will be explained why getting people thrown on you is not a big deal for that perticular 'village ' There is no emotional...

The demon lord is for once actually smart Evil overlord list for success The artifact which is the source of my power will not be kept on the Mountain of Despair beyond the River of Fire guarded by the Dragons of Eternity. It will be in my safe-deposit box. The same applies to the object...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1470776/oracle-the-fate-of-heroes/ Here is one where the female MC is 51 years old and decided to go save the world anyways because the hero is in bedrest(leg fracture)and grounded by his mother

Or turns out that the holy sword is actually a shape shifting weapon and everyone other hero only used it's sword form until our mc came along In his hand he carried an ancient and trustworthy weapon, called by the Hero as a Browning semi-automatic. Or anything presented as magic is usually...

Hey fellow scribblers! So, I'm working on a fantasy parody, and I'm trying to figure out how to best use those classic fantasy tropes – you know, the chosen one, the ancient prophecy, the wise old mentor, the ridiculously overpowered sword, etc. Basically, I want to lean into them hard, but in...

Hi,I have recently been working on this new fantasy story please let me know what you think about it! Constructive criticism are welcome https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1470776/oracle-the-fate-of-heroes/

Player choice which means no plot armour and this means that there's is nothing like proper you should kill evil . Rivals, demonic practitioners, slavers, raiders, corrupt government officials, corrupt churches, cultists, all the 'traditional' fantasy bad guys are not always your enemy you can...

I am making a game not a novel