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The best magic systems use the One Thing rule. As in, any magic spell can break or circumvent logic and science, but only for one thing. Every other aspect of the magic has to be logical within the strictures of reality. Take for instance Cyclops from Xmen. He can shoot the physical...

Chapter 32, where the BB is defeated, but not all is yet right at home. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/640693-becoming-monsters/chapter/658740/

Ah, but DEM is often thought of as unsatisfying. Tension in narrative is derived from connecting with a character, then applying stress to that character. It can be sweeping and grand, like taking a ring from the Shire to Mount Doom, or it can be simple and unrelated to anyone else, like a...

Start by creating a scenario where the MC is slowly building up tension. Think a lot of the works by Poe, like The Raven, Tell-Tale Heart and Pit And The Pendulum: normal life is where the character begins, then through the prose something is nagging, then building, then terrifying. Somewhere...

Chapter 31 is where Honoka faces down the Big Bad. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/640693-becoming-monsters/chapter/658736/

Depends on what you mean by unique. I feel a good narrative is what makes any story good. However, here’s a few aspects that make my LitRPG a little more unique than typical: Main Races included in the first book are Ymirian, Succubus, Goblin, Holstaur, Naga, Beastkin (otter), Kikiyaon and...

Resplendent Linguistics! It can only be defeated by a master of Dumb Fu, someone so heinously stupid that they affect the very reality around them.

Chapter 30 is where it all goes wrong. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/640693-becoming-monsters/chapter/658734/

Only get to pick three. This is the problem with this poll.

Chapter 4 is the princess entering the Alliance city at last. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/654576-the-adventures-of-princess-procrastia/chapter/658218/

Where can I get this online massage? Joking aside, I can confirm this is THE Annabelle Hawthorne. Here are links on her sites that have links back to her Scribblehub platform. Really a shame this wasn't caught earlier, she's been updating longer than me and when she's caught up HFHM will have a...

Outlines help, but ultimately sitting down and writing is where you need to be. "I tried that, it didn't work." What you probably need is a warmup story. So, have 2 stories: your epic, sweeping narrative that has all the things you want to tell, and then a dumpster where you put whatever...

Chapter 29 is when the girls get some major upgrades before making their assault on Bone Castle. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/640693-becoming-monsters/chapter/654111/

You say this isn't about LitRPG, yet that is an exact corollary that really shouldn't be ignored. Both games and books are at their core a way to convey a story. World building, plot, characters, flow of prose, all are directed by the creator and then enters the minds of the audience. Many Final...

Historically, shinobi were mostly spies and worked in intelligence and counter intelligence. And that was it. There were clans that trained in complicated ninjutsu, but the purpose of shinobi was to blend in, find the information, possibly leave misleading information in places, then blend in...

Chapter 28 is a sexual montage set to music, but it is also something more. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/640693-becoming-monsters/chapter/654105/

Did someone say futa? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/640693/becoming-monsters/

Chapter 3 is more focused on Maiden Vajin and her dinner plans. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/654576-the-adventures-of-princess-procrastia/chapter/657586/