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  1. Layenlml

    Real names.

    The question is, ¿why? Was the name itself? Or was some experience like bullying of something else added to it? Personally, I will feel weird if I change my name, especially since I don't have a real reason for it. Must be something heavy for changing it. Even in gender change many people I...
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    Real names.

    Well my name was from someone my mother saw in a series and she liked the name qs for the meaning is 'Warrior', don't know if she knew about the meaning tho. Nothing much to say about liking it or not since is normal to grow without caring about something like a name, and when you do care you...
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    How to write waking up with an headache.

    Search on youtube how does a headache feels, or migraine
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    How to properly write multiple POV in a scene where they are all together

    Well the best way to solve this kind of problem is usually finding a example. Sadly I dont remember any If you will constantly change the PoV, using different types of letters or using sme kind of obious separation line lines or the straigth: *Change of PoV to X* I ws angry so I kicked a can...
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    Writing Prompt What do you do when the pterosaurs attack? Will you run? Will you hide? Will you fight back? Why did the resurrect? Why are they bulletproof?What Do?

    As far as I remember, dinosaurs would have a hard time dealing with a modern world fauna simply because of the lack of evolution. They are not smartest ones of the bunch. Even if they are bulletprooof, things like burning oil in their face preventing them from breathing would kill them. But...
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    Any advice for my stories for a newbie author

    Be clear of what you want? I know of some novels where the authors just stopped writing or had to re make everthing just because everything became a mess or went to direction they didnt like. Just do you. People will both love and hate your novel no matter what you do. As long as you are...
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    The origins of races in fantasy writing.

    I did read something about humans learning how to hunt in packs after observing the wolves do so. That was amazing
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    The origins of races in fantasy writing.

    You just need to think of a need, something that forces them to do so. Like beast people just like monkeys losing their fur but keeping their claws, ears, etc. since they are convenient. Elfs? They are not known to be naturally agresive so... thiner to hide and run better? Ears for better...
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    Pick a power but the next person to reply chooses a drawback.

    They can't hide and are always near you. This means everyone can feel them and obiously feel you
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    Pick a power but the next person to reply chooses a drawback.

    You have to make a certain amount of contact with said animal. You also live their lives as if it where you doing so. This includes a masive headche due to the information.
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    Pick a power but the next person to reply chooses a drawback.

    The wishes can't benefit you inmortality
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    What does a cover need to be good?

    Idea: Maybe something like Meruem from Hunter x Hunter holding the world? But with your Mc intead, signaling the difference in power?
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    Drug-Addicted MC

    Feels like a nice touch to add at the end of a chapter or a scene without mentioning it directly and for the viewer to realize that he does it every time he can. It is your novel, just do what you want. I doubt there is a problem unless you make a fake propaganda of how heavenly and all mighty...
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    is an Inexplicit protagonist gender too confusing for readers?

    Seems like your problem could be solved with a ' I refer to 'her' as a her because everyone traits 'her' like one?' Type of explanation. I dont know the setting, the context or 'Her' personality, but could work since almost every one refers to others by genders
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    Writing On a scale of 1 to 10, how despicable are my antagonistic characters?

    Is hard to rate this kind of character since I mostly base how despicable they are by their actions. Take the revenge guy, he does a full on straight-kill aproach killing everything, assassination? Is fine. or smart planner with poison, rumors, economy, accusations? Is ok. But if he does the...
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