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Does saving a chapter as a draft and posting it later not make it show up on latest updates or something? Cause scheduled mine 15 minutes ago and it never showed up despite having already been posted. Unless it's only my phone that can't see it.

An 'evil' character for me is one who fully(or at least mostly) believe they are in the right and is willing to do nearly ANYTHING to achieve it. (Think Light Yagami) I can read about them doing whatever convoluted shit as long as they're working towards something and the author doesn't have...

I should've mentioned the start of the first chapter as well, it was meant to be a bit distant since it was dream. You see, in this dream the MC was basically supposed to be observing himself from a more distant third person perspective. Towards the end he mentions August talking, which is him...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468068/unhinged--dwellers-of-the-deepa-deep-sea-monster-evolution-litrpg/ (You can read any chapter, except for the April Fool's one for this feedback. They're 1.5k-2k words long, shouldn't take long) So basically, I wrote my first story in a more omniscient...

You forgot to list the downsides

Nah isekai is a trash genre

Too little info. What's the PoV? First? Third? Or god forbid, second pov? We know nothing of your MC's personality, only you can say how he'll react, unless you tell us a bit more about him.

Sexual content with minors is literally against ToS i think. All the authors with loli sc make them mentally 18+, I'll leave it up to you on how to feel about that.

Lolis are more of a symbol rather than an age group. You'd want to look at height and body structure(note, not just one or the other, one needs to differentiate between a shortstack and a loli). As a wise man once said: "I may not be able to define loli but I know it when I see it."

I'll be waiting, it's lonely here.

Two is best, else you'd be a filthy Xeno. That, or an amputee.

Just say 'Capitalism' smh

Here's mine: "Beware the evil, mechanical demons! Through an arcane language, one can make a contract and wield their potent powers beyond human comprehension. However, these beings are masters of malicious compliance and will only follow exactly what the contract states. Erroneous...

Alexa?

So the premise is you're trying to describe a piece of modern tech to some person in a fantasy world, except you want to scare the shit out of 'em. The description can be as long or short as you want, just try to describe one relatively modern invention as eldritch and cryptic as you can.(i.e...

Yes, we are. And perhaps they are alone too.

For anyone curious about that CN novel, it's basically two main characters instead of one guy with two bodies. From how you described it though your MC would only be able to control one body at a time, while the rest will basically be husks only capable of doing simple tasks... Would be...

We will live forever, or die trying.

No, my characters build suffering.

That is a name, not a motto. Sides, I have already decided to call the star "The Slosher"