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  1. Nerothemajin

    I need feedback on my story please

    Thank you for your reply i'll see what I can do to change it
  2. Nerothemajin

    I need feedback on my story please

    Look i'm mostly like you have very few/no friends and I try to promote my work however I can, I think the synopsis is fine because the story is hard to be summarised in a paragraph because it's indeed large as for the protagonist, I make him insecure by default and he is ambitious and outgoing...
  3. Nerothemajin

    I'm joining the "TEZUKA MANGA CONTEST"!... but can you help me by giving some ideas?

    Actually they did, with smartphone being maybe the worst isekai ever
  4. Nerothemajin

    I'm joining the "TEZUKA MANGA CONTEST"!... but can you help me by giving some ideas?

    First don't make it an isekai because the isekai genre is so common now that it's really easy to fail. As for the opening arc it depends on your narrative: For me, I like building up some relationships first and then go into action
  5. Nerothemajin

    Share your stories

    Title: F:Ran Genres:Fantasy,Action/Adventure,Shonen Synopsis: As the big bang emerged stars fell on the earth and the dust that those stars contained created life as we know it. Humans, decided to use this energy, as they found it very compatible with the human's physical capabilities.They...
  6. Nerothemajin

    I'm joining the "TEZUKA MANGA CONTEST"!... but can you help me by giving some ideas?

    I'm also joining the contest, but I can give you some ideas if you want
  7. Nerothemajin

    I need feedback on my story please

    Can anyone read my story and give me feedback? I want to know your thoughts about it. Title: F:Ran Genres: Shonen( If you know what that is),Fantasy,Action/Adventure Synopsis: As the big bang emerged stars fell on the earth and the dust that those stars contained created life as we know it...
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