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yeah that's the intended effect of that memory. The world in that story is quite fucked up.

I might be dim, but 'his thighs still hurt' didn't connect me to SA. I would have thought that he was beaten or something if it wasn't for the title. But yes, I think it can be done in a more tasteful way than physical effect of the fact. Like in Tsukihime, a SA girl was described (in a memory)...

What if I have one original and one fanfic? :blob_hmm:

By this definition, OP's first chapter isn't even 'softboiled'. Read like the start of a slice of life smut comedy piece.

A nice piece of action with a little thriller, but not scary. Though this might just be me. Imo the 'horror' comes from the unknown and unseen. A 'horror' that you could see and converse with normally and disposed of easily isn't a horror. I'd be scared if I was Aegis in that situation, but...

I didn't say there isn't any editor here though :blob_hmm: . I said that no editor would write a forum post full of spelling errors like OP did.

Read your only other post on this forum. I don't think any 'seasoned editor', or just normal editor, would write like that. Sorry if I'm wrong but it just doesn't instill any confidence.

I go case by case, based on whether I feel their comment is valid or not. I have a reader that can't seem to agree with many things my protagonist was doing (still, they stuck with the story despite the disagreement, so I'm grateful). Even so, I only changed the story when I feel like he had a...

It's related to that, so I can post my schedule on my blurb, but I didn't think of an universal 'best time'. I was just trying to find a good time for myself.

Which timezone does SH use?

It was already quite suspicious when 2 of them popped up in the same hour, and both are new accounts.

I see. I might consider changing it if I can free up some time, but for now I think 3 is enough. How many chapter did you have before you opened your patreon, if I may ask? I had like 10 chapters in the backlog but one busy week and I burned through them (when I tried doing once per day)...

I don't have a Patreon yet, but what is Patreon stretch goals? :blob_hmm:

Let's say the goal is to attract more readers. I know that posting once or twice per day is best, but I don't have time to do that. I have other works that involve writing, and when I tried to post once per day, I got burnt out. So maybe 3 times a week is good. But can it just be 3 times a...

I'm sorry but I don't think I have any suggestion to give. I didn't do anything out of ordinary. Added some smut, posted the first 5 chapter with an hour or two in between each post, then one chapter per day for the next 10. Now I'm down to 2 chapters per week. No advertising or shoutout or the...

I just assumed that he had another contracted work, though in that case you can just drop the 'failed' one and keep the contracted one.

I was thinking that I saw someone who collects 1-star the other day, and you appeared :blob_hmm:. Thank you. I'll try not to. I suppose you just get used to it over time. I think that it'd be better if you can only rate a story after reading a certain number of chapters though.

And got my first 1-star :blob_pat_sad: . Tbf I haven't seen any longer story without at least one 2-star, unless they only have a small number of readers. Still a bit sad to see though.

Unfortunately, not number 1 of the treading list, but 2. Still, it's quite a pleasant surprise to be on the treading list at all for my first story with only 21 chapters:blob_hide:.

Good job :3. There're still 105 people better than me in Handjob, so I got my work laid out for me. :blob_pat_sad: (And also my ranking just changed to #103 in arranged marriage now. Guess I need to arrange more marriages).