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  1. MrPopocap

    Need Patreon advice!

    I was in the same situation as you until yesterday, when I just decided to make my Patreon. My advice is to start small, with a donation of 1 dollar with advantages like 1 chapter earlier, and when you increase the amount remember to increase the benefits, like a title in discord, thank the...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hey, can you please give me a feedback? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/610661-the-green-arrow/chapter/610664/ I think that while my story serves to read and pass the time , my first chapter wasn't as good as I wanted.
  3. MrPopocap

    Life is Strange

    Blasphemy! Pineapple should never be associated with pizza!! People like you are the reason the world is ending.
  4. MrPopocap

    I'm not sure whether to continue my story with 'I' or my character's name.

    That's the problem, I like both 1 and 3 person and I prefer 3 person, but some things would get confusing because I started the story in 1 person. Should I just switch to 3 person entirely or is there a way to keep switching between 1 and 3 person?
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    I'm not sure whether to continue my story with 'I' or my character's name.

    First I will warn you that English is not my first language, so one of the reasons could be this. Ok, so here is my question. If you read my story you will notice that I use ''I'' many times and other times the name Oliver, to talk about our protagonist. The problem I am having is that I am...
  6. MrPopocap

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    LOL I love your sincerity !! Please, do a review and post here. Thanks in advance https://www.scribblehub.com/series/610661/the-green-arrow/
  7. MrPopocap

    Tips or advice with locations and fights scenes

    As you can see from the title, I struggle a bit with locations and fights and that is slowing down my progress with the new chapters. I would write 1000 k words in 20 minutes now i'm stuck in chapter 5 for two days already. Any advice is appreciated This is my story btw...
  8. MrPopocap

    Any tips or help with my story?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/610661/the-green-arrow/ If you can give me some feedback, I would appreciate it.
  9. MrPopocap

    I'm a newbie when it comes to writing so I need help with the synopsis

    Hmm, I can put ' why he went to DC?' or something like that. Thanks for the advice
  10. MrPopocap

    I'm a newbie when it comes to writing so I need help with the synopsis

    Just like the title says, I'm a newbie with his first job in the making. I have chapter 1 already done, but the synopsis is bothering me a little. Does anyone have an advice where I could do better with it? The synopsis is this: One day, a man woke up inside Oliver Queen's body. Armed with...
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    Will my story get me cancelled on twitter?

    Can you make your Hittler have a full mustache or a beard ?
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