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  1. EliseValkyria

    Help, how to balance a slime character?

    Hello everyone again Today's topic, I need help balancing a slime character. My novel has a lot of action scenes and battles. So I need them to be entertaining and tense. And most importantly, with repercussions, so that the readers are afraid of what might happen to the protagonists. My...
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    My tips on writing about comedy as a tool for a story

    Hello everyone In today's program, I present my tips or guide (I hope) on how to write about comedy. I will start with a very important clarification, as you already know, humor is subjective, it is not the same for everyone. What makes one person laugh, to another may just cause...
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    Tips for writing to an influencer or youtuber character, but who is a real douchebag?

    Hello everyone again Today's topic is about I need advice or ideas to write to a character, who as the title says is an influencer or acts as a famous youtube. Now the context of why In my novel, the protagonist has a harem of girls, all of them are of different races, a fox girl, a succubus...
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    What have been the worst comments or hot takes you have received?

    Let's try for a moment to laugh about the bad times we had. In my case it was once, on another webpage, a comment that my novel was not inclusive enough or "woke". Although my novel at no time tries to appeal to that audience; my novel is even largely military or war themed. Besides the fact...
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    Talk about child physical abuse in a chapter.

    Hello everyone Today I think I have a difficult topic in my novel that I want to talk about, but due to the seriousness of the topic I want to do it in the best way possible. This topic is child physical abuse. My first question quickly, is it allowed to talk about it on this website? The...
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    I Need Advice on Creating a Mental World

    Hello everyone. I am currently creating a reflexive chapter for my novel. In it my protagonist has been seriously injured and is in the hospital, because of weird magic, science fiction and all that stuff, he can't recover until several sentimental problems that he has inside him are solved...
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    I just wanted to talk about my novel "Valkyria Squadron".

    Hello everyone Today I'm not here to discuss anything, or at least that's the idea. Instead, I just wanted to tell you a little bit about my novel, well, for no reason at all other than I've worked on it quite a bit on this and I want to show it to others. Valkyria Squadron | Scribble Hub...
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    Is this a Scribblehub sister site or a bad clone site?

    Sorry if this is not in the right place in the forum, but I have a doubt and curiosity. You see, while I was looking on the internet for places where my novel or art could have been stolen, you know I always have the fear that in the end the thief is more famous than me and I don't know it. But...
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    Please, I need advice on patreon

    Hello to all Today I want to be a little quicker than usual so I'll get right to the point. What advice can you give me when creating a Patreon? What are the things I should post on it? What things can you tell me to be especially careful about? I've been writing for quite a while now and...
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    Writing My tips on writing action scenes

    Hello everyone As always I'm back, this time without a question to break the rhythm a little bit. In today's program, I present my tips or guide on how to write action scenes or battles for your novels. But I emphasize that this is just my way of working on it, and it is only advice, not...
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    Will it be a good idea to publish my novel also in webnovel?

    Hello everyone As the title says, I would like to know what you think about the subject. I want to add my novel to my different sites and one of them would be webnovel. But I've heard some pretty nasty things from that place so I'm very hesitant. Things like they offer contracts but in the...
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    Do you think this character has a mental disability or a mental disorder? And if so, what do you think it is?

    Hello everyone again Today I come with another question looking for advice from more people as usual. Today's topic is about if you believe that this character here is suffering from a mental disability, mental disorder or autism because the truth is that I know very little about the subject...
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    Arachne vs Lamia

    Hello everyone Today I came as usual with a simple question and somehow I manage to make it complex. The question is simple, which of these two types do you think is better, or would you like to see over the other? Why do I ask this question and in what way is it complex? Well, that's...
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    I need ideas for calm family activities and Epic names

    Hello Once again I come to all of you for advice. As the title says, I am looking for activities that a united family could do. My novel is mainly action but right now they are in a calm moment and I wanted to take the opportunity to show a little more of the characters and their...
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    Writing A little help with the English language

    Hello everyone, I hope you have a nice day. Today's topic may be unusual or strange to you but I'm still looking for help to get it right. First of all English is not my native language, so my way of writing may not make sense to many people, I have already experienced this in my own One of...
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    The future of war

    Hello everyone. As it seems tradition, every now and then I come up with a new topic to ask for advice for my novel, and this will be no exception. The theme this time will be much simpler than usual. The future of warfare. In my story there is quite a lot of conflict, in a modern time, but...
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    Clichés of sick people

    Hello everyone again Today I come with a rather simple question. What to do to write the typical chapter where the main character has a simple flu but acted as if he was in intensive care instead of going on with his life with a stuffy nose. I'm looking for things to fill the chapter with...
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    How to write a character in love but in a comical and embarrassing way

    Hello everyone again I think that every now and then I open a new thread on every topic that I don't know anything about, but the truth is that your advice has helped me a lot. The theme this time is love. In my novel the protagonist is already married and even has a harem which loves him...
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    Now it turns out that my novel is now inclusive and Woke?

    Hello all. Recently, on another site where I published my novel, a person appeared to be a member of an association LGBTIQARPGNTR+% √3 HILUX apache V8 hybrid and knuckles. He said that although it was an attempt on my part, my novel clearly lacked more diversity in its characters and...
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    Tips for writing a medical emergency

    Hello I was planning a bit about what to write in one of my next chapters and I came up with a good idea, the problem is that I don't have much knowledge on the subject and I thought if you could help me a little. To give some context: I have a character who has spent a lot of time in the...
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