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  1. Juia_Darkcrest

    Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor

    Sorry, I don't speak modern hieroglyphics. I only understood half of what you wrote, which wasn't very nice at all. Please refrain from typing as a 13-year-old girl to a group chat of other teens if you wish to be understood properly.
  2. Juia_Darkcrest

    Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor

    @Doctah_Quack This was even better than my other troll thread, bravo
  3. Juia_Darkcrest

    Show me your retcon skills.

    no one had noticed, or had mentioned it anyway. In most fanfics, it probably wouldn't matter, but in High School of the Dead, the writer died, and it wasn't continued afterwards... it was only a week long, and I missed the first night, and moved onto the second night. The only reason I...
  4. Juia_Darkcrest

    Here, have some life advice from a great thinker of our times. Invest in real estate, there's...

    Here, have some life advice from a great thinker of our times. Invest in real estate, there's no such thing as a permanent record, always eat breakfast, all the girls on the internet are actually dudes, and you should never, ever buy the extended warranty on anything. Ever. Oh also, chicks...
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    Umm... I am a dude... so unless you want my 6 ft 280 lbs ass literally crushing you, I doubt...

    Umm... I am a dude... so unless you want my 6 ft 280 lbs ass literally crushing you, I doubt that is a good idea.
  6. Juia_Darkcrest

    Would you click on this?

    Drat, Another Rick Roll... You would think that there would have been more than 1.7 billion views by now
  7. Juia_Darkcrest

    Show me your retcon skills.

    Missed a day in a fanfic in a world that only lasted 6-7 days in the manga. I didn't actually retcon it, but I acknowledged my error in an AN. It would have been nearly impossible for me to add a whole extra day in at that point.
  8. Juia_Darkcrest

    Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Un-Seasoned (Unless you include salt!) Editor

    Hey writers/authors/weird furry creatures from Alpha Centuri! I’m an unseasoned book editor, fanfic writer looking to turn author, wanting to troll connect with the Scribble Hub Smut Hub community. I know how hard it is (you dirty dog you) to tell if your work is actually any good or if it is...
  9. Juia_Darkcrest

    Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Seasoned Editor

    Wait Leilani is and Editior... wait I knew that... Leilani! I want to hire your services at some point! *Ignores OPs glare*
  10. Juia_Darkcrest

    Cool ideas you'll probably never use?

    Two things You know damn well the milk will be at the bottom of that dungeon Which leads to the 2nd point. When Dad's truly get lost on the way to the store to get some milk... "Mommy, where did Daddy go?" "He went to go get Milk. He will be back someday... I hope."
  11. Juia_Darkcrest

    Fandom feature gone?

    Well the guidelines have not been updated yet if Tony has planned a change.
  12. Juia_Darkcrest

    Good title effect for a named monster.

    Well, in all honesty, without knowing exactly what you are trying to write, it is hard to give you great suggestions. Is it some farm your MC is running? A brothel? Is it some weird take on an adventurer who, instead of killing the bosses of dungeons, captures them and makes them part of his...
  13. Juia_Darkcrest

    What's the most attractive part of the human body?

    I wouldn't say a fan, but I believe I read a few pieces years ago that were of Arabic origin. No, it is more along the lines that the eyes are said to be the window into someone's soul. Someone could be conventionally beautiful, but if their eyes don't seem to express anything, I don't find...
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    What's the most attractive part of the human body?

    eyes for me... the right set of eyes, and I couldn't care less about the rest of the body, well, as long as she wasn't massively overweight.
  15. Juia_Darkcrest

    Shoutout Swap

    there is the kicker. lol
  16. Juia_Darkcrest

    Shoutout Swap

    It is disingenuous to shout out to something you haven't read yourself. I am writing. I don't have much reading time. I could shout out to @JayMark all day long, praising the cow gods godly steaks, but since I haven't had time to read anything he has wrote, that puts my own credibility in...
  17. Juia_Darkcrest

    Make a generic CN synopsis of your story!

    appropriate response
  18. Juia_Darkcrest

    Good title effect for a named monster.

    When I read this, my initial reaction was, " You need to go find Jesus." Then I recalled I am a gooner, not a god-fearing individual, so let's see what we can do here. I assume this is for some monster girl webnovel. Something simple like Prolific Mother 100% chance of producing two...
  19. Juia_Darkcrest

    My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?

    Honestly... as both an Author and reader... You need to tell, you need to develop things... If I compared LN's to a North American equivalent, it would be Youth-Adult novels instead of something like High Fantasy. Edit (hit enter too soon) You should focus on worldbuilding and relationship...
  20. Juia_Darkcrest

    Would you click on this?

    It might get me to your main page at the very least, whether I take the next step and actually read would depend on tags and synopsis, but the shameless promotion of the.... wait, was this supposed to be your cover? Or just a quick thumbnail for something else? Either way, I might be tempted to...
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