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*:blob_hide::blob_hide:Ahem*Isekai novels and Jo Jo bizarre adventures?

Banned for saying overcoming your limits.

Short answer I want to be OP as possible

Banned for using fancy words that does not make no sense

:blob_teary::blob_aww:Thank you soo much for saying that. I'll do my best to polish it.

All of it was helpful except for the this So im planning to rewrite tonight so thank you

It may not be much but I just need know If there's anyone here to review it a little bit Here

It may not be much but I just need know If there's anyone here to review it a little bit here

Yesterday was mostly watching JoJo bizarre adventures diamond unbreakable and the 1st episode of gankusko (maybe I spelled it wrong)

and also putting down arcs to show how my characters evolve overtime.

yes ideas about just getting better at telling storys to a point where an express my story ideas in a manga format so that I can be happy to read them

Thank you very much Edit I was want him not be op by attacking right this moment time but latter on

th Thank you I when I Realized this I thought I should rewrite it or maybe correct it so I chose both but it will take sometime for the rewriting process

Just the First Chapter

Can some pls read my chapter for any mistakes or flaws so that I can improve on them later

Well It took me about 6 weeks just to know what to write then putting it on with not enough time due to a lot work outside so advice just learn more about how your going to write it and find some time (btw can someone read my first book Riftela: a Beginning of a lifetime(Book 1)