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  1. TheMonotonePuppet

    Best Fighting Scene

    Premise: You have two people: one is a tall, thin man who is a maniacal priest of sorts with and another is a short child with ghoulish features and a endlessly regenerating, undead body and martial arts expertise. Task: Write the best fighting scene you can with solely physical moves (no magic...
  2. TheMonotonePuppet

    My Story "Charisma"

    I am asking, begging, for reviews and comments. Like all corporate people, I want expansion! Growth! I was hoping that I could just wait and it would grow... but it's so slow and I'm too impatient!!!:blob_reach::blob_reach::blob_reach: So if you guys could please check out my story and put the...
  3. TheMonotonePuppet

    Biggest pet peeve as an author

    I feel like every author has one or more things that just rubs them the wrong way. For me, it's laughter and sighing. Or more specifically, the overuse of "Fufufufufufufu", "Hohohohoho," and "Haaah..." The first is just incredibly fake no matter what, the second should be used very sparingly...
  4. TheMonotonePuppet

    What is the sickest or most horrifying thing you have written?

    I am deeply fond of trying to mess with my readers' minds and their stomachs. I made a character (her name is Betsie( fully-fleshed out with an entire ~8000 words (maybe more) of their own POV, with an entire personality that was flawed with her own desires, wants, and personality traits... all...
  5. TheMonotonePuppet

    What tags bring the most traffic to your story?

    So... on my story, there are a couple tags that seem to bring in, by far, the most amount of people (besides the title itself, which isn't a tag). I really want to know why it is mind control and sexual abuse that brings the most there. :blob_teary: The tag for transgender is third place, which...
  6. TheMonotonePuppet

    Killing My Character

    So, in my story "Charisma," the brother of Sol, the MC, is bed-ridden and dying. He currently has the class Fatal Brain Cancer Patient and many alchemical agents being pumped into him. However, it has not healed him of said cancer because it has a System of its own and its locations (metastasis)...
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